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PostSubject: Fourth Drawing on Paint   Fourth Drawing on Paint Icon_minitimeWed Mar 14, 2012 2:17 am

I didn't do the eyes, I got them off a picture.

I tried to shade but ^^

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Please critique and rate c;
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PostSubject: Re: Fourth Drawing on Paint   Fourth Drawing on Paint Icon_minitimeWed Mar 14, 2012 6:41 am

I can point out a few mistakes c:
-The gloves don't have any finger sockets.
-She is slanted.
-Her sleeves are suspended underneath her shoulders, not on it.
-The smile is too small and is on the chin.
-There is a brown patch on the hair which isn't needed.

Overall, 6.9/10. Good job though. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Fourth Drawing on Paint   Fourth Drawing on Paint Icon_minitimeWed Mar 14, 2012 8:19 am

I can tell you're trying and that's all that really matters ^-^

Pretty much aubrey said, I'd also add in that her neck might be just a tad bit short, and her legs are a bit awkward, but, you did very well nonetheless c:
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