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Junior Fantagian


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PostSubject: Happy never after wa ha ha   Sun Mar 25, 2012 12:06 am

Once upon a time there was a girl called Ella
She had a very mean step mother
and too really not bright step sisters
well anyway
She had to do lots of house work and she dreamed
of marring a prince
one night a ball was on her step mother and sisters
went and Ella was left at home doing house work
while Ella was crying she heard a big *POOF*
sound it was her fairy god mother
she gave her a beautiful grown but it
took a while to choose what Ella liked
but it got somewhere
Then the fairy god mother put her two fingers in her mouth
and blowed as hard as she could and there popped up
a limo Ella was ready to go to the ball or was she?
While Ella was going to the ball
She saw her step mother and hided
she was scared
all out of nowhere she heard a
big *BANG* her step mother
was really evil and she heard a magic wand drop out of a window
so she picked it up
and the clouds turned dark




WATCH THE MOVIE TO HEAR THE END



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Flynn
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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Sun Mar 25, 2012 11:22 am

Um, this is Cinderella.
And it bears a striking resemblance to your other story, "Cleo and Ella".
I'll rate this 2/10.
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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Sun Mar 25, 2012 11:23 am

I'll rate it 5/10. Good.
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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Sun Mar 25, 2012 11:27 am

This is basically like Cinderella like what Yuffie said,
And its also a knockoff on Cleo and Ella.
You should be more creative next time, don't rip off from another story.
I would rate this 4.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:34 pm

wow you people don't read this is an ACTUAL MOVIE and she's like
summarizing it
ppop

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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:36 pm

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 7.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:50 pm

I am good at rap shut up.
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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:15 pm

yuo guys she summarizing a movie, that's why she said watch the movie to learn the end xD
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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:20 pm

/\ What Relora Said
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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Mon Mar 26, 2012 3:59 pm

Oh. I understand, but it still sounds lame. I rate 2/10.
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PostSubject: Re: Happy never after wa ha ha   Mon Mar 26, 2012 4:41 pm

its okk 6/10 and makkine made it good (:
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