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PostSubject: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:28 pm

honey...
was always so hard to find in the tress,,, big big tress...
honey.....
blowing in the wind.... so hard to fiND:....
buzz
buzzzzzz
buzzz
as he
PICK SU P
the lfower
and smells it quickly and wuietly
he find.....
HONEY
and quiety..
grab sit...
for
the cycle..
of hony...
to start again....
buzz
buzzzzzzzz
buzzzz

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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 3:30 pm

Lol This is kinda funny. 5/10?
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 4:43 pm

I think this actually has a much deeper meaning

it is talking about the loss of someone

who had the scent of flowers

yet


is dead at the same time



and has a deep hatred towards it
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 4:54 pm

ashsal833 wrote:
Lol This is kinda funny. 5/10?

I agree.
Its not a real serious story but its a laugh out loud moment
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 4:58 pm

it is serious you jerks do not understand ART

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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 5:03 pm

Timegear wrote:
honey...
was always so hard to find in the tress,,, big big tress...
honey.....
blowing in the wind.... so hard to fiND:....
buzz
buzzzzzz
buzzz
as he
PICK SU P
the lfower
and smells it quickly and wuietly
he find.....
HONEY
and quiety..
grab sit...
for
the cycle..
of hony...
to start again....
buzz
buzzzzzzzz
buzzzz

"Bears like honey"- that's what I thought when I read this. I love this. This is the best story ever.
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 5:08 pm

10/10

this the best story i ever read
i liked the part when the bee buzzed
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:15 pm

Timegear wrote:
it is serious you jerks do not understand ART

Its our honest opinion. No need to call us jerks
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:21 pm

WHat did we do to you no need of calling us jerks hon.
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:48 pm

wtf yes i do it is that good
ur
just
stupid math people

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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 7:09 pm

Timegear wrote:
wtf yes i do it is that good
ur
just
stupid math people

Ur very cranky...
We just rated what we thought.
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 7:31 pm

*** Swag Down Pack *** wrote:
Timegear wrote:
wtf yes i do it is that good
ur
just
stupid math people

Ur very cranky...
We just rated what we thought.

Honestly, I think this story does not need a rating. I feel that by writing a story in this certain format, Timegear is trying to get a certain message across, since I doubt she would ever write this way under normal circumstances.
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 8:02 pm

What are you implying, Hop?

Time, I don't know how to express myself but, YOUR STORIES are always a work of art.
And yes, EVERYONE BE MATHiful gerks. Gosh, they just don' understand you.
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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 8:04 pm

thank you s you are the only person with logic nowadays GOD

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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 8:17 pm

This is magnificent, I love it.

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PostSubject: Re: honey- a story   Sun Mar 25, 2012 8:19 pm

good yoou better love it if you don't your an illiterate

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