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Misty Life
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PostSubject: Lords Of Shadows    Sun Mar 25, 2012 4:00 pm

This is pretty weird but when I think of a title I think of a story...

Anyway this story is called Lords of Shadows! I think I'll tell about the characters later..

I'm not finish though

Characters:

Alex Black- Shadow Lord 1
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more coming soon

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Alex was opening the closet. He heard the sound of sorrow, sadness and
pain. "You are one of the five lords..." whispered a ghost voice. Alex freaked
out and closed his closet. He rushed to the living room and panted.
Alex thought it was his imagination and went back to his room. opened
the closet. A hand pulled him in....




I'm working on the story so... Hope you enjoy it!

Rate and critique?

WOOHOO! I'm done! Here's the first chapter:

Chapter 1- The Mysterious Sound

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PS. I'm little, deal with it....I think Alex's picture is a bit off


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PostSubject: Re: Lords Of Shadows    Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:04 pm

Sounds interesting to tell you the truth, I can't wait to see more ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Lords Of Shadows    Mon Mar 26, 2012 4:38 pm

Relora wrote:
Sounds interesting to tell you the truth, I can't wait to see more ^^

Thanks:) I think I might be posting chapter one around today or so? I'm finishing the 2nd lord today Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Lords Of Shadows    Mon Mar 26, 2012 4:41 pm

This sounds intriguing, I really like your concept.

I'm excited to see more of it. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Lords Of Shadows    Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:42 pm

cool!
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PostSubject: Re: Lords Of Shadows    Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:44 pm

Cant wait to read it!
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PostSubject: Re: Lords Of Shadows    Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:12 pm

Yay! The 1st chapter is release but not quite finished yet...
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PostSubject: Re: Lords Of Shadows    Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:27 pm

Sorry for double posting but...

The 1st chapter is finished Guest
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PostSubject: Re: Lords Of Shadows    Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:32 pm

I like this story, you just need to improve your punctuation. ^^ 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: Lords Of Shadows    Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:48 pm

Snapple wrote:
I like this story, you just need to improve your punctuation. ^^ 9/10

I was kinda lazy hehe
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