Fantage Forum
Welcome to the Fantage Forum.


Fantage Cheats, Secrets, Glitches, Info & Help.
 
HomeFAQSearchMemberlistRegisterLog inUsergroups


Share | 
 

 Katniss!!!!

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 15
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow

PostSubject: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:56 am

i made katniss!!! look!!!!!!

Look just Look at it!:
 

please rate critique and other stuff

new and improved one
Spoiler:
 


Last edited by ~Marci~ on Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:53 pm; edited 2 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://fantage.com
pokeranger
Hero Fantagian


Posts : 5449
Join date : 2010-01-29
Location : Loading...

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:59 am

Pretty good. The head's a wee bit too big.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 15
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:00 am

okie thanks in nor good with head sizes
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://fantage.com
Usui
Hero Fantagian


Posts : 5275
Join date : 2011-09-09
Age : 17
Location : Worldbuscus

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:22 am

I like it, This is pretty Good.
But her Head is a bit too big.
But this is really good though. c:
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.thepokemonland.forumotion.com
Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian


Posts : 8763
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 14
Location : Somewhere

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:44 am

I love it! The head is a bit to big but still, AWESOME!!!
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://nerurumi.deviantart.com/
Bbydoll
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1413
Join date : 2010-09-08
Age : 19
Location : Sinnoh

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:17 pm

it's cute but why is she white with blue eyes. did you read the book. did you.
anyways, when she shoots her arrows, she pulls it up in front of her face, not by her abs.
& she's standing very awkwardly..
I think you did a good job on shading the braid & the facial expression.
but the mockingjay pin isnt a mockingjay D:
rate: 6
Back to top Go down
View user profile
eden
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4612
Join date : 2011-07-20
Age : 15
Location : the trash

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:24 pm

Open for critique:
 
Tell me if you can't read it. I couldn't find right pen pressure.
Also, I know I use a tablet and you probably use a mouse, but at least try. c: It really helps a lot.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
castiel
Devoted Fantagian


Posts : 554
Join date : 2011-11-15
Age : 16

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 1:45 pm

7/10 c:
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Golden-Star
Loyal Fantagian


Posts : 1818
Join date : 2012-01-13
Age : 103
Location : My Candy Love Academy

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 1:53 pm

The head is big and thats it.
8/10
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://yummystrawberries.canadian-forum.com/
Monsterbunny
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1425
Join date : 2010-12-11
Age : 17
Location : Behind you

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 1:55 pm

Yep the head is a bit too big

8.9/10
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 15
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:52 pm

ok thanks guys!!!

so i did wut fuko and bby said so heres the new one::::::::::::::::::::
>:3:
 
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://fantage.com
Bbydoll
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1413
Join date : 2010-09-08
Age : 19
Location : Sinnoh

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:55 pm

big improvement :DD
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 15
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:59 pm

why ank yauhh >:3.

<]:)-/--<
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://fantage.com
Blue
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 3257
Join date : 2011-05-04
Age : 103
Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:10 am

Aww, this is so cute! c:
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://underworld.forumotions.in
IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!!
Featured User


Posts : 4132
Join date : 2011-06-01
Location : derp

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Mon Apr 09, 2012 2:56 am

That looks amazing. 8/10
Back to top Go down
View user profile
troller mcloller
Regular Fantagian


Posts : 226
Join date : 2012-03-17
Age : 19
Location : no

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:53 am

Its really nice but whats wrong with her eye ?
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Bbydoll
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1413
Join date : 2010-09-08
Age : 19
Location : Sinnoh

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:02 pm

I guess she's squinting so she can aim her arrow.
& are we all posting katniss drawings now? I thought this was for marci.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
eden
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4612
Join date : 2011-07-20
Age : 15
Location : the trash

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:20 pm

That's much better! I give it a 9.5/10.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 15
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:02 pm

@teddie

please dont post YOUR art in MY topic
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://fantage.com
alex
Administrator
Administrator


Posts : 23506
Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 18
Location : google maps

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:02 pm

There's some anatomy problems that have been pointed out already, but it's cute. (:

_________________


tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 15
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow

PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:06 pm

but i added fingers...!! see?!
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://fantage.com
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Katniss!!!!   Today at 11:35 am

Back to top Go down
 
Katniss!!!!
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Going to Nala's cabin to change.. xD. (KATNISS.)
» Well, here we go [Katniss Everdeen]

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Fantage Forum :: Creations :: Artwork-
Jump to: