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Melissa H.
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PostSubject: drawing >U<   Tue Apr 10, 2012 2:35 pm

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rate any critique

(shes about to start running)
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:27 pm

7.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:40 pm

Her legs look rather odd.
Her neck is too small, yet her Head is a bit too big.
But, It's really cute, I like it a lot. I would rate this 8.1/10 :]
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:09 pm

I can't see it:(
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:56 pm

ok here::::::: http://i43.tinypic.com/wiuha9.jpg
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Tue Apr 10, 2012 6:10 pm

Is it a chibi? It looks so cute! Don't mind the feet and hands if its a chibi. Just fix some body parts like the legs.

8.9/10!!
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:27 pm

9/10. the head is alittle to big
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:28 pm

disney4ever wrote:
9/10. the head is alittle to big

I think its a chibi
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:50 pm




Okay, heres my explanation for my critique. 1) I think it was a little abnormal for the arms to be larger than the torso. 2) You don't have to work on this, since its probably your style but I think you should add more of a curve to the head. 3) I fixed the legs for you, since the left one seemed like a painful position for me. 4) I tried to fix the width of the arms and made the torso a little more accurate. 5) This doesn't really matter, but I tried to extend the stick things on the sunglasses (sticks.. xD).

Overall I really like this. Especially the speech bubble with the heart c:.
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:53 am

thenks belleh!!
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:10 am


PRAISE:
1.The speech bubble was a clever touch.
2.The way you did her bangs was cute.



CRITIQUE:
1. The head is much too large, even for a chibi.
2. The zigzags in the eyes are a little disturbing.
3. Her arms are bigger than her middle.
4. Her leg isn't kicking back, it's bending sideways.
5. is the thing in near the back of her head hair or something else?
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PostSubject: Re: drawing >U<   Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:14 am

its hair in a bun
and yeaa i knooooo TT^TT
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