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PostSubject: ~Relora's art gallery~   Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:53 pm

~Critiques are welcome, ratings are welcome.
~No arguments or fighting on MY thread please and thank you
~Don't call people out on an inaccurate critique, I can take care of it
~Don't post your own work here please and thank you!
~Don't go easy on me please, I'm a tough girl!

Latest picture(s):
 
Busts (warning large!):
 
Full-body (warning large!):
 

Sketches:
 

Okay a few things I want to add in is that a lot of the dark spots and stuff you see aren't actually see-able when I look at the paper in my hands... I assume it's because the picture gets illuminated or something xD


Thanks for stopping by :3


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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Fri Apr 13, 2012 4:06 pm

I love them all. 8/10. C: I just think that shading under the necks and noses would be okay. I understand these aren't your most recent, but if you still do that, there's a suggestion. C:
I like the second one the best.
I like the full bodies better as well. But like I said, I like them all. ;D


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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Fri Apr 13, 2012 4:12 pm

The second one is nice
9/10
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:14 pm

Each of your drawings has so much personality...it's like reading a story. c:

There really isn't much to critique, from what I can see.

I remember that you once told us about your drawings and how you could not scan them, so I have been excited to see them.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Sat Apr 14, 2012 12:40 pm

I love them all. My personal favourite is the first full body.

My only critique is that the lips on the last bust curve up on one end, but curve down on the other.

All in all, 9.5/10.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Sat Apr 14, 2012 9:47 pm

Abstract wrote:
I love them all. 8/10. C: I just think that shading under the necks and noses would be okay. I understand these aren't your most recent, but if you still do that, there's a suggestion. C:
I like the second one the best.
I like the full bodies better as well. But like I said, I like them all. ;D


Thankies, I try my best and shading is a thing I have to work on c:. As for the full bodies they aren't very good in my eyes, they appear stiff and I'm not good at positioning everything... and seeing as I don't have a full body mirror I can't use myself as a model so I ended up using an old barbie doll xD

Silmaril wrote:
Each of your drawings has so much personality...it's like reading a story. c:

There really isn't much to critique, from what I can see.

I remember that you once told us about your drawings and how you could not scan them, so I have been excited to see them.


Thanks I appreciate that more than you would think :3

Rei wrote:
I love them all. My personal favourite is the first full body.

My only critique is that the lips on the last bust curve up on one end, but curve down on the other.

All in all, 9.5/10.

Yea, that picture was a while back ago and I've been pretty bad at lips (hence why all my latest pictures have lines not lips xD). But I'll keep that in mind when I work on doing lips on my pictures again C:

I appreciate the comments guys, I wanna show you some pictures really bad... but 3 are in the hands of a teacher from a project and one is a series of doodles.... on the back of my notes! So if I scanned that, my words would show through Dx

I'm actually working on shading under necks, I've seen a few pictures to where I can start mimicking it so that should help, my stuff is always a work in progress xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Tue Apr 17, 2012 3:47 pm

Minor update!

~New section(s)
~1 picture added
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Tue Apr 17, 2012 4:51 pm

9.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Tue Apr 17, 2012 5:24 pm

omg i LOVE the full body ones! i can never do that good on full body i gotta post mine sometime though :3
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Fri Apr 20, 2012 2:58 pm

3pic_Skull♥ wrote:
omg i LOVE the full body ones! i can never do that good on full body i gotta post mine sometime though :3

Thank you!

I actually didn't want to put them up because I didn't think they looked good XD
But I'd like to see yours I bet they're good :3
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Fri Apr 20, 2012 3:16 pm

I love all your drawings,
These are wonderful.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Fri Apr 20, 2012 3:20 pm

These are WANGMAZING .O
You should make a shop!
I can NEVA draw like this gurl C.

100000000000/10
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Mon May 21, 2012 4:44 pm

i luv deese

[french accent] i will steal your art skillz and keep em for moi self! HE HE HE HE HEE [end of being a frenchie]

yeaa just kiddin u keep em
on the last bust the nose is kinda weird thoo ^^; no offense
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Tue May 22, 2012 2:09 pm

Piper wrote:
i luv deese

[french accent] i will steal your art skillz and keep em for moi self! HE HE HE HE HEE [end of being a frenchie]

yeaa just kiddin u keep em
on the last bust the nose is kinda weird thoo ^^; no offense


none taken ^^


I was kind of playing around with that one ;P
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Wed Apr 24, 2013 11:28 am

~bump~ added a new picture to full bodies, can also be viewed in latest picture spoiler ^^
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Wed Apr 24, 2013 11:31 am

wow you're really good I never knew you draw!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Wed Apr 24, 2013 2:10 pm

Mami wrote:
wow you're really good I never knew you draw!!

Only when I'm in the mood haha.
and thanks c:
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PostSubject: Re: ~Relora's art gallery~   Wed Apr 24, 2013 2:28 pm

Relora wrote:
Mami wrote:
wow you're really good I never knew you draw!!

Only when I'm in the mood haha.
and thanks c:


You're welcome c:

You're good!!
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