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Golden-Star
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| Subject: A story of mines  Sun May 06, 2012 1:59 pm | |
| Okay, I am thinking about writing a MCL literature to the MCL forum so here is just a short thing. I just want comments. If u like it i might as well just post here and of there .D Chapter One: Introduction. (Episode 0) - Spoiler:
"Moving?" I asked my parents. "Where too?"
"MCL." My parents replied back. "MLC? It sounds really boring." I said without asking what the initials stands for. "Oh no honey, it's a really heartful place. Its where me and your father met..." My mother went on. I moved my hand as her mouth. "Mom you told me that story 400 times." I rolled my eyes. "Swaggyheart, for heavens sake. It's not you choice." Dad said. And now we were heading toward the bus off to MCL. It was a long trip. As we reached our new house, I took a moment and stared. How lame, I thought. My room was pretty artistic compared to the one I had previously. "So what school am I going to?" I asked my parents as I loaded some stuff in. "Sweet Amoris High. The school me and your father-"
"Alright! I get it." I cut my mother off. Tomorrow is school and I wont like it.
Chapter 1: A new high school: (Episode 1) - Spoiler:
"And this is the student counsel room." My principle said pointing. I decided to walk in there. As I walked in my eyes were blown away. A tall blonde haired and brown eyed guy smiled and waved at me. My mouth dropped. Drool began to flow. "Hi I'm Nathaniel. Student body president. You must be new here." Nathaniel waved. "Mhm." I couldn't stop staring. "Well aren't you going to introduce yourself?" He said turning purple and with a hand over his head. "Oh. I'm Swaggyheart." I said. How rude was that. Well I can't just give up on this gorgeous hunk. After our conversation, I bumped into Ken. An old friend from my old school. "Ken?!" I yelled. "Oh hi swaggyheart." He said drooling. "What are you doing here?" I asked. "Well I moved here also." Ken said drooling. "Uh huh..."
I seen there was a courtyard so I also walked there. I bumped into someone. "Hey watch were your going." someone said. "Sorry." I said looking up. I gasped. "What are you staring at?" The boy asked me. "Hi I'm Swaggyheart. Are you always this nice to some people?" I asked. He grinned. "Yes i am and I'm Castiel." Castiel said. His red hair danced to me. "Hey I recognize that shirt from somewhere." I said to him. ''Where?" Castiel asked. "Some band." I said. "Cool." He said. I walked away. "Hey Swaggyheart. Wanna go on a date?" Ken asked me. I couldn't say no. He was so sweet to me back in my old school. And so we did.
Pictures episode 0: - Spoiler:
My room PS: i forgot the band name of Castiels shirt so i didnt put it. And also do u like C. I was to lazy to do episode 2 | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: A story of mines Sun May 06, 2012 2:20 pm | |
| Ken really likes to drool. xD
Anyway nice story. What does MCL stand for? ( I have no idea, Idr watch tv sooo) | |
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: A story of mines Sun May 06, 2012 2:24 pm | |
| - Abstract wrote:
- Ken really likes to drool. xD
Anyway nice story. What does MCL stand for? ( I have no idea, Idr watch tv sooo) Thanks. My candy Love | |
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| | Subject: Re: A story of mines Sun May 06, 2012 2:26 pm | |
| - Abstract wrote:
- Ken really likes to drool. xD
Anyway nice story. What does MCL stand for? ( I have no idea, Idr watch tv sooo) MCL= My Candy Love i can't wait for more chapters I really like it so far Some parts it was funny xD | |
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: A story of mines Sun May 06, 2012 3:28 pm | |
| - Cake wrote:
- Abstract wrote:
- Ken really likes to drool. xD
Anyway nice story. What does MCL stand for? ( I have no idea, Idr watch tv sooo) MCL= My Candy Love
i can't wait for more chapters
I really like it so far
Some parts it was funny xD Thanx cake. When i get tht stupid outfit i was telling u about I'll write more. | |
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: A story of mines Tue May 08, 2012 4:08 pm | |
| Thanks C. DONT READ - Spoiler:
The principal told me the next day to sign up for a club. I chose basketball. I had to find 5 balls first though. How weird. "Have you seen a ball?" I asked Castiel. "Nope."
I looked around and found some. Nathaniel came to me. "Hey would you do me a favor?" He asked. "Sure." I said. "Could you get Castiel to sign this note?" Nathaniel said showing me the note. "Okay." I said walking to Castiel. Of course i met Castiel in the same space. The courtyard. "Would you sign this please." I asked. "No." And that was the end of discussion. Oh great. How am i supposed to make him sign this? Ken came in asking me if I needed something.
"Yeah would you sign this for me for Castiel?" And so he did. A few minutes later, Ken came crying to me with a ripped note. "Sorry swaggyheart." He cried. Than Castiel came angry. "You could've asked me again instead of signing it!" And that was it. He was angry. I was so embarrassed. The next thing you know, Nathaniel came hollering at me. "Ugh! Thats the last time I would ask you to do me a favor!" He screamed. Oh no. I messed up. I was so sad. Ken was to busy asking me out on ANOTHER date to see me sad. "Hey can I walk you home?" He said. "Sure...." I said.
Chapter 3: Episode 3: (YAY I AM ON EP 3!): Lost dog.READ SORRY ABOUT THE STRIKES IDK WHY IT DID THT.
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Some date, I said walking into school. Woof. Is that a dog?! "Swaggyheart. Catch fifi (I think) now!" The principal yelled. "But.." "Hurry!" I was now on a wild goose chase. Bleh. I had to find a dog now. I bumped into Castiel. "Hey. Have you seen a dog around here?" I asked. "No why?" He asked me. "Because the principal wants me to get it for her." I said breathlessly. "Well aren't you little miss helper." He smiled. "Thanks." I found his collar after talking to Castiel. Than i found his other stuff. I ran back to the hallway and seen Nathaniel. "Have you seen a dog?" I asked. "Fifi ran away again?" Nathaniel said. Wow this must happen everytime. Of course he said no. "Do you like dogs?" I asked. "No. I like cats." He said. "Oh. Do you have one?" I asked. "Nope. My mom's allergic to them." He said. Too bad for him. I ran into the classroom meeting Melody. "Hi have you seen a dog?" I asked. "Fifi ran away again?" Melody asked.
Again I thought the same thing. This must happen everytime. Well I bumped into Castiel again now asking him if he had a pet. "A beligan shepard." "Oh is his name fifi?" I asked. "No its demon." Oh really? "Oh IDK what a beligan shepard is." I said. He smiled. "I'll show you him one day." That was it. I was so tired of running up and down. I finally went in the gym. A tall dark skinned boy was in front of me. "Hi. Im Dajan. I don't go here." He said. "Oh." We had a short conversation and staring. I was so in love. Man, there are so much cuties around Sweet Amoris High.
Sorry for the spoiler alert ppl who play it and wasn't up that episode .D
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: A story of mines Tue May 08, 2012 4:17 pm | |
| Episode 2 confused me.... I re-read it, too.  Anyway, interesting episodes. | |
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: A story of mines Tue May 08, 2012 4:19 pm | |
| - Abstract wrote:
- Episode 2 confused me.... I re-read it, too. Anyway, interesting episodes.
Ooops sorry about tht. I will edit that again | |
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♠Luka♠
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| | Subject: Re: A story of mines Tue May 08, 2012 9:29 pm | |
| I really like it! Its just the part when it said
not you choice
It should be "your". | |
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Usui
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| | Subject: Re: A story of mines Tue May 08, 2012 9:53 pm | |
| I like it a lot but,
You said "MLC" on the introduction, while it's suppose to be "MCL"
But It's great. :3 | |
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Castiel is awesome 
