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PostSubject: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Wed May 02, 2012 6:38 pm

not colored:
 
colored:
 

This was inspired by Jessie J.'s hair lol. It's supposed to be black, but I may color it so that's why I didn't shade it much. Anyway, took me 50 minutes exactly actually. You like?

I was able to color it at school actually, an hour of coloring lol. (Half a day) Anyway, the colors are always different than it should be, I wonder why... Neutral


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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Wed May 02, 2012 9:01 pm

I can't see it that clearly. But I think it looks good. The arms look a little bit weird.
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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Wed May 02, 2012 9:09 pm

Did you press it? It sent a link to Servimg.com I think to lead you to the bigger link of that.
Anyway thanks. C:
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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Wed May 02, 2012 10:58 pm

The head is really well-drawn, and the lips look amazing (although they could be a little wider)! The neck is really good, but it needs to be slightly wider, but not stiffer. Her shirt looks sort of stiff, but clothing is hard to draw. c; The hands are clearly a unique style that I never use, so I'm not going to critique that. I think what you need to work on most is bringing the elbows down. I know it seems strange to not to draw short forearms when the elbows are bent, but trust me, you'll see the difference.


Overall, this is a job well done, especially considering that you focus mostly on abstract art.

I rate it 8.2/10
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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Thu May 03, 2012 2:31 pm

Thank you for the critique Hop. C: I pretty much like all kinds of art so I went with humanize kind for this one.

Yeahh... it actually was supposed to be a lot different, like the hair would have looked like Jessie J.'s hair, and I couldn't find anything on Google to tip me with this, so I took it to my own mind. It ended up greater then expected though.
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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Thu May 03, 2012 4:09 pm

That is really creative:)
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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Thu May 03, 2012 6:45 pm

Beatiuful
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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Fri May 04, 2012 1:41 am

It looks really good but to me the arms look a little skinny or maybe it's just the elbows :/
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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Fri May 04, 2012 4:37 pm

Ty. They are actually supposed to be "fire" so they may be thin".

I was able to color it, she has a "light green aura" around her, but it isn't appearing much.
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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Fri May 04, 2012 11:14 pm

Abstract wrote:
colored:
 

This was inspired by Jessie J.'s hair lol. It's supposed to be black, but I may color it so that's why I didn't shade it much. Anyway, took me 50 minutes exactly actually. You like?

I was able to color it at school actually, an hour of coloring lol. (Half a day) Anyway, the colors are always different than it should be, I wonder why... Neutral
Don't worry about the colors not turning out perfect! It looks like you used colored pencils, and unless you have 10,000 different pencils, you won't always get the exact color you want with them. Honestly, I think the color scheme is pretty cool. It's very unique and original. However, to make the aura show up better next time, try using the crayon trick I showed you a while back on Tinychat (if you remember). It will make the aura seem light, yet bright and vivid.

Also, you're totally welcome for the critique. It's great that you're trying different styles! (Which I should probably do as well, but I'm too lazy to experiment with a wide variety of styles. Meh.)
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PostSubject: Re: My latest drawing. (Coloredd!)   Sat May 05, 2012 8:22 am

Thank you once again Hop. C: I didn't think of the crayon trick you showed me, I just tried to do a light aura, but it wasn't very seen.

I think my printer shows up a different color though, it's much brighter on paper (or see-able)
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