~ Finding The Lost ~ [Book I'm working on.]

Once upon a time, there was a beautiful girl called Jessica.
Jessica loved travelling, but another thing she also loved was her younger sister called Denisse. They always played together, and didn't even care about their age differences. And when they thought they couldn't be more united..
Something happened..

Something really bad happened.. It all started the day that Jessica, her dad and Denisse were going to go for vacations to Easter Island.
"If only mom was here.." Jessica sighed, looking through the airplane's mirror. For a second, William (Jessica's and Denisse's dad) was a little worried, thinking Denisse would get sentimental. But the good thing is that Denisse wasn't even paying attention, because she was too busy trying to finish a puzzle.

The plane started moving. Everyone fastened their seatbelts, and soon enough, the plane had already rose into the sky. And all of a sudden, nothing could be seen through the windows, and the clouds quickly turned from white to black.
"We are traspassing a turbulence area, everything seems to be under control. Please do not panic and wait for future notices." A man said through the speaker. There was more lighting, and thunder would be heard even louder. A final lightining struck the airplane's back, and the sky cleared real fast after that.

The plane went lower, and lower, and suddenly, it crashed into a tropical island. Jessica was the first one to stand out of the plane's ruins. She had not much more than a few wounds, and a open scar. She tried to stand up, but she was only able to get on her knees. For a few seconds, she wasn't able to think clearly. But then, her eyes widen, and ran towards Denisse. She looked down to her, and carefully carried her. Luckily, she was still breathing. Sadly, William was gone.

Jessica took Denisse to the beach. Then she placed her on the white sand. A few minutes later, she woke up.
"I'm glad you woke up." Jessica said, silently."We must find somewhere to sleep." She continued.
Denisse narrowed her eyes, doubtly and then she asked:"Wheres daddy?"
"I'm so so sorry.. He didn't make it." Jessica sighed. "I'll go search to the jungle for food." "You should stay here and look for any ships that come near." Denisse nodded as Jessica's shadow faded away in the dense trees of the forest.

Jessica was really calm, untill a unexpected sight with a Tiger. She heard footsteps, and quickly climbed up the nearest tree she saw. The tiger was just below her, the tiger looked around and he didn't see her. The tiger walked away as Jessica got back down. She wasn't worried at all, until she realized where the tiger was heading.
"OH NO!! I MUST SAVE DENISSE!!" She thought, as she ran as fast as she could towards the beach.

Denisse was sitting gently, while she was trying to make fire by using two branches and putting them together. Jessica saw the tiger approaching to Denisse, and ran up the it.The tiger didn't care about Jessica, it wanted Denisse. Or maybe soemthing Denisse had.
"Quickly!! Empty your pockets!" I yelled. Denisse dropped everything she had and ran as fast as she could.

The tiger looked at the two sticks Denisse was using. They were shining for some reason. The tiger took one and ran away back into the forest.
"Woah.. What was that?"Jessica wondered
"I don't really know.." Denisse said.

"Have you found any place to sleep?" Jessica asked.
"I fear I havn't" Denisse sighed, she was really dissapointed.
"Oh well.. We'll sleep under that palm." Jessica explained. "Maybe we could gather some other wooden logs and build a small place where we can stay for the night."

It was already a little late for that. It was already almost sunset, but whatever. Anything would work. It would be safer to build a place where we can rest than to sleep outside with tons of animals that come from a jungle beside you.
"Hey look!" Denisse said. "There's an abandonded house where we can sleep"

It was true, there was a small wooden cottage. Not fancy, not at all, but it was more than enough to survive. They spent the night there, laying down on the wooden floor. "I miss home so much.." "Do you think we will ever be able to go back to civilization?" Denisse asked.
"No.. I don't think we'll ever be found.." Jessica answered "Plus, if we get back there, we'll be stuck in an orphan! Maybe forever!"

Jessica woke up not feeling very well. She was really hungry, and she actually had been in the island for almost a week. One of her wounds was hurting alot, and she didn't really want to stand up. It hurt her so much.

Denisse was really worried.

Also, as a tip, I put this in spoiler just encase you didn't want one. Try not to put capital after capital after capital when she thinks or speaks. "I LIKE CHEESE!!" she said could just be "I like cheese!!" she exclaimed. "I MUST SAVE HER NOW!!" she thought could be "I must save her now!!" she bravely thought! See what I mean? You don't see WOOHOO in a lot of stories, do you?