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Abbey
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PostSubject: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 11:27 am

Yeah.

Here is the old version, done September 23rd 2011:
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Here is my new version, which I started a day ago and finished today:
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Side by side:
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I think I improved. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 11:43 am

u did improve but it depends on wich way you put it idk if its just me but the first ones eyes are better you improved the boats and alot more i just thinks the hair and head and mouth was better on the first one


But yah anyways you did improve ITS AWESOME Smile!
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 11:45 am

weekays0 wrote:
u did improve but it depends on wich way you put it idk if its just me but the first ones eyes are better you improved the boats and alot more i just thinks the hair and head and mouth was better on the first one


But yah anyways you did improve ITS AWESOME Smile!
Personal preference, I think. I can see where you're coming from. The thing is my art kind of changed styles so it looks different? xD But thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 1:54 pm

you did improve a lot but you were always good Smile
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Abstract
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 4:21 pm

Wow, that's very much improved. ;o

I just don't like the face as much as the first picture though. ((((my opinion)))

Actually you know what? It looks like she grew up... very very fast.


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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 4:28 pm

i think you have definitly improved and yes youve canches styles A LOT :DDDD but thats guud!

i like the september hair betta tho
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o
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 6:48 pm

You definitely have improved, and your improvement is amazing! I can tell that you worked hard on both of them. The only thing is, the fingers on the girl's left hand on your newer drawing look a bit small, if you know what I mean. But hey, drawing fingers that aren't straight is super difficult and you did pretty good on the hand.
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 7:09 pm

Woah. You are soo good at drawing OuO
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 8:07 pm

you make beautiful art

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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 11:26 pm

they're both beautiful *0*
But I think the torso is more proportioned on the first one, than the second one.
but they both so purdee.

HAY BBY WHERES MY ICON HUH
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Mon May 07, 2012 11:42 pm

Abbey, your art is beautiful.
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Tue May 08, 2012 2:23 am

Wow these are amazing
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Tue May 08, 2012 1:02 pm

OwU okay my topics are weird
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Tue May 08, 2012 7:03 pm

this is beautiful
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PostSubject: Re: Improvement!   Thu May 10, 2012 1:46 pm

The torso, nose and hands improved to me :3

Though I always loved the original so my heart must stay with it ;o
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