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eden
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PostSubject: I made a fantroll   Wed May 16, 2012 10:57 pm

And I actually like her.


This is her everyday self and some dreambubble stuff.

And here she is in talksprite form. I tried to make a .gif, which I did, but it moves a lot because CSS hates me. I would make it slower but I was kind of in a rush to get all of the frames together. Thanks for the editing on the animation, Madgeleena! <3

Anyways, her name is Sahine Malaya, and she is 6 sweeps old.
I would make her older or younger but she just seems more like 6-sweeps. I dunno.
Anyway, she has teal blood so she can be a middle blood or a low-class highblood.
Also her lusus is a a hawk with two faces. One on the front, one on the back.
Her god tier is the maid of space, her chumhandle is enthusiasticFlight, her land is the land of air and skies (LOLAAS), which is inhabited by birds. her strife specibus is scissorkind, she uses the array fetch modus, And her typ/ng style /s some\/\/hat l/ke th/s.

I wouldn't enjoy critique on the poorly-made sprites, but I would enjoy critique as a character herself. Please tell me if I should change anything at all, and if you do, please set some examples of what I could change it to.
Also I will make a description of her sometime, but not right now. When I do I will reply telling so, and edit this with it.

EDIT: When I make the description, please be honest and tell me if she is marry-sue!
EDIT2: Description in-progress!

Your name is SAHINE MALAYA and you are six sweeps old.
You have a hawk lusus, which has two faces. You have to admit, it does creep you out sometimes, but you're starting to get used to it. Anyways, you have many interests. One being the FINE ARTS. For some reason, everything around art is fun in your opinion. You also have an interest in SCIENCE and sky-related things. Yep, that's right. Everything from the sky itself to trolls flying without planes. Hell, it'll never happen, but you don't believe in such words.


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PostSubject: Re: I made a fantroll   Thu May 17, 2012 6:41 am

This is actually pretty good. Although both of her names should have six letters each, so may I suggest just Malaya for her last name? Or Malaia, whatever you like the most.

Other than that, I don't really see much I would change when it comes to character, but that's because I haven't got much to work with. What you've got so far sounds perfectly fine. :)
I'm just kinda wondering how she is like? Personality and stuff? She seems kinda like the flighty type, from what I can tell.

Would you mind if I tried fixing your sprites? I've made quite a few myself. <--Link to my fantroll sprites, fyi. I've got too many.
EDIT: I fixed your animation, now it's at least more stable. Download if you want to make any changes.
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PostSubject: Re: I made a fantroll   Thu May 17, 2012 4:36 pm

I think it's absolutely amazing. I can understand why she uses that style of speech and her horns match her symbol. I think it's interesting that her strife is scissors. Is she good at arts and crafts? I like her lusus. It reminds me of dave's bird lusus.

I love her chumhandle, but all the characters (excpet for john) Have their words in their chumhandle starting with G, C, A, or T. Personally I think her chumhandle is fine, and if you want to keep it, keep it.
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PostSubject: Re: I made a fantroll   Thu May 17, 2012 5:09 pm

@Magdaleena
OH I JUST NOTICED THE 6 LETTER THING....thanks for the notice! I already knew that but I didn't notice the last name's 7 letters.
Also the personality will be in the description when I make it.
And thanks for the sprite edit! ;v; It looks so much better.

@Cynthia
Thanks so much!
And yes she is good at arts and crafts. C:
Haha yeah. I know, but I couldn't come up with words that matched herself as a character that started with G, C, A, or T. I may change it in the future, but for now I'm keeping it.

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I'm going to make her description sometime today. It'll take me a while though because I'm under stress from a competition that happened today and some personal things happening.
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PostSubject: Re: I made a fantroll   Thu May 17, 2012 8:51 pm

Description started!

Sorry for double post.
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