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Melissa H.
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PostSubject: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:54 pm

OH MY GODS IM SO PROUD OF THIS!!
[b]please, NO critism only constructive critism
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if you cant see it tell me so i can put an outline round it.
added Reyna&Jason in her imagination but imma scan it.

rate and critique!!!!!
so frikkin proud! ;`)
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:03 pm

I love it! 10/10 it is awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:34 pm

Her head and neck are in a real awkward position, why are they tilted like that? HAve you tried doing that pose in real life? It's uncomfortable.

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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:39 pm

My how much you've improved Crying or Very sad
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:40 pm

One hand is fatter/thicker than the other.
Shade more, makes it a bit more realistic.
I don't understand what you are looking at either, and it seems a bit stiff.
I give it a 7/10. I don't remember all of your artworks, but this must be your best one.

And sorry, I don't know what is the biggest difference between critiques and criticism so...
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Sun Jun 03, 2012 10:32 pm

This is really good, but I suggest you lower the arms so they are resting on her legs. It would look more relaxed, and the pose would look way better if you did. I don't want to explain too much, but I really think the arms should be resting on the legs to improve your drawing.


8/10

Great work! Razz
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Mon Jun 04, 2012 3:39 pm

ok thsnks

anddd zuko: shes tilting her head cuz shes sad call me crazy, bt i do that too...
pika: yeaaa i made sum changes to Pipes when i was drawing Reyna & Jason... im adding the finished pic now.
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:05 pm

Makes sense to draw Jason, but how could she have met Reyna?



This is just the official pic of Reyna from Rick's blog. Maybe it'll help you? But I don't really like the expression on her face, do you?
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:03 pm

ita a fanfic seen from MoA,
if you read the THO books i think youd understand

and yes i do jus shes all happ y and googlyey eyed cuz jasons back. and Pipers worried thats going to happen.


wait, now that im explaining this, im just gunna make a Fanfic
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Mon Jun 25, 2012 10:01 am

that looks amazing! <3
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Wed Jun 27, 2012 9:57 pm

thanks.
and on july 7th im going to draw it agian!
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Wed Jun 27, 2012 10:23 pm

AW!!!! OMIGOSH!! IT'S ADORABLE!!!! You should ink it and color it!!!
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:22 am

10/10 man! You are an AMAZING artist! cheers
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:16 pm

aw thanks!!
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:27 pm

You drew yourself...CONGRATZ

1000000000000000000000000000000/10
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PostSubject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD   Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:33 pm

no, heh, i just chose it as my username cu i like it,
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