"WELL?",Sir Gilbert roared, still holding his paw against the tree, with Greely between the paw and the tree. "Answer me! Answer US! What is your explanation for all this?" Greely did not look like the usual powerful and mysterious wolf he was. He looked like a little scared pup who got kidnapped in the middle of the night. Greely looked around, decided that the other shamans outnumbered him, even if he used his magic. He cleared his throat. Sir Gilbert lowered the power in the paw that was pressing down on Greely. And then the old wolf explained the truth behind all the horrid things that had happened in Jamaa. Sir Gilbert pulled away his paw, stunned. Liza looked a little confused by Sir Gilbert's reaction. Peck said, "Huh. Seems like that wolf is lying for sure." Cosmo stepped up and asked "Sir Gilbert? What's wrong..?" "No." came the reply. "No, he is not lying. I can feel it." Sir Gilbert turned around and faced the crowd. "The dark is returning."
That was just a peice from the story that I am writing. This is towards the end, but more like the third-to-last chapter or something like that. Sooo... what do you think? Is this good? Does it need more details? If so, what details should I include. Do not hesitate to reply with your guesses about where this story is going.
PS: I mentioned that this is towards the end, but I'm not even close to done with this thing.