Fantage Forum
Welcome to the Fantage Forum.


Fantage Cheats, Secrets, Glitches, Info & Help.
 
HomeFAQSearchMemberlistRegisterLog inUsergroups


Share | 
 

 Melissa, My OC. and something else

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 15
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow

PostSubject: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:18 pm

Well i used MS Paint for this i know the shading is stupid.
Spoiler:
 
i also made a fanart of percy's sister, or a gender bender?:
Spoiler:
 

PLEASE RATE AND CRITIQUE


Last edited by Piper on Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:38 pm; edited 1 time in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://fantage.com
3agle
Senior Fantagian


Posts : 440
Join date : 2012-01-26
Age : 16
Location : Google

PostSubject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:24 pm

I like them.
8/10

I think (in the second one) the green doesn't look right with the orange, I think red would work better.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian


Posts : 8760
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 14
Location : Somewhere

PostSubject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:24 pm

omg i love it 9/10
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://nerurumi.deviantart.com/
Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 15
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow

PostSubject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:39 pm

3agle wrote:
I like them.
8/10

I think (in the second one) the green doesn't look right with the orange, I think red would work better.
i agree but thats her camp shirt and shes the daughter od Poseidon
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://fantage.com
Lenka
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 3929
Join date : 2012-06-17
Location : clap aloNG IF YOU FeeL THA t hapPINESS IS THE //TRUTH//

PostSubject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Mon Jun 25, 2012 7:19 pm

I love them! 9/10! The only thing is (and this might just be my opinion) the wrinkles on the second ones shirt look a little weird, but that's it! I think they look awesome! Great job!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Abstract
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4563
Join date : 2010-07-14
Age : 16
Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables

PostSubject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Mon Jun 25, 2012 7:25 pm

9.5/10

Gurlfrand~ I love them, but here is the thing:

Collarbones, the second picture needs more shading under those "wrinkles" or whatever, the smile is a bit to round, and that's it.

I think the shading just needs to improve, the rest of the piece is really good. (I don't exactly know your style)
Back to top Go down
View user profile
ℓσкє
Senior Fantagian


Posts : 312
Join date : 2012-06-20
Age : 15
Location : エドラス

PostSubject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:59 am

10/10.

Why does everyone care about shading? Everything looks great...
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Usui
Hero Fantagian


Posts : 5275
Join date : 2011-09-09
Age : 17
Location : Worldbuscus

PostSubject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Tue Jun 26, 2012 8:53 am

Wow this is really good. c:
The shading is okay, but a bit off.
I can see you're really improving. ^-^
So I would rate this 9.1/10.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.thepokemonland.forumotion.com
Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 15
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow

PostSubject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Tue Jun 26, 2012 11:44 am

THANKS!!!
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://fantage.com
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else   Today at 10:55 pm

Back to top Go down
 
Melissa, My OC. and something else
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Melissa N/O LIST

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Fantage Forum :: Creations :: Artwork-
Jump to: