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Squirtle
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PostSubject: my drawing   Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:06 pm




my program stinks. it will not do shading. oh well.. rate out of 10 and critique please.
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:13 pm

ok heres my crituqe,

dont use the brush, use the pencil thats why theres white and try making the arms exen (eheheh) and dont have the shirt sqeeze the body

7/10!!!

oh and the left sholder is longer ^^;

ather than thbat amazing

and try the curve and line tools


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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:16 pm

thank you! i have trouble with the arms and hands (that includes fingers). i will do the pencil next time.
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:16 pm

good, always happy to attemp to help
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Fri Jun 29, 2012 10:01 pm

This is beautiful Very Happy I love it I give it 9/10 The eyes have to much white dots so it makes it look weird but other than that its FANTASTIC Smile
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Fri Jun 29, 2012 11:29 pm

opinion: the arms need to be level since she's standing and her necks kind of big...

but it is still awesome 7/10
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Sat Jun 30, 2012 1:11 am

This is cool but the arms are kinda uneven
9/10
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Sat Jun 30, 2012 7:15 am

yes i know i'm still working on my arms, hands, fingers, and eyes. i might get a different program. thank you all!
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Sat Jun 30, 2012 7:54 am

One of her eyes are bigger than the other. Her neck it a bit too big. One of her sleeves are bigger than the other, which makes the arms bigger or smaller, than the other arm. Overall this was really cute, and I do like it. c: so I would rate this 7.6/10. :3 But this is really good though. ^-^
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Sat Jun 30, 2012 7:58 am

10 it's way better than I could ever draw. Great job with the hair!
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:38 am

9.5/10 its okay...
I pmed you some tips.Its a tip that i dont like sharing with alot of people unless they want tips and i can tell if they can do better so yeah i pmed you it (: hope the tip works
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:59 am

I love it. The only critique I have is that her smile, eyes, and arm position make her look like she's almost trying to hide something, "I have nothing behind my back. Heh. Heh heh." that kind of thing. You know what I mean? Unless that's what she's supposed to look like. But it's an amazing drawing.
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PostSubject: Re: my drawing   Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:00 am

Aha julia now i think that about the pic see you!! -.- its awesome dude ( I HAVENT GOT A FISH BEHIND MY BACK ) i do that all the time :3 then get a row for being a complete fool!
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