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Oliver
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PostSubject: IMPROVISING WRITING.   Tue May 11, 2010 6:14 pm

Dude, I don't even know what the story im about to improvise is bout.
XD
HERE I GO.

Mumbling some words.
Thats what he was doing.
....
And I was there, listening to him. It was pain.
Yet I couldnt leave. He would just keep mumbling. He would let his hair cover his eyes. And would make his glasses seem ice white.
But underneath all that, I could tell there was sorrow.
I couldnt leave him.

He stood up.
Oh, he was going to leave me...

Taking his hair out of his face. He walked off.
I wasnt going to follow him.
He would frown at me.

So there he was, my older brother.
He wen't off.

And for some reason, I couldnt get out of his room.

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PostSubject: Re: IMPROVISING WRITING.   Tue May 11, 2010 6:20 pm

OMG THAT SOUNDS COOL!!!!!!! what happened, OoOoOoOoO, TELL MEEZ!! lol, i wanna know why there was sorrow, and i wanna know why he left, TELL ME! lol

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PostSubject: Re: IMPROVISING WRITING.   Tue May 11, 2010 8:07 pm

Aw thanks Vatt!
And I dunno what happens.
It was completley improvised.

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PostSubject: Re: IMPROVISING WRITING.   Tue May 11, 2010 9:29 pm

Nice job! I don't get how it's improvised though
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