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PostSubject: Some art   Tue Jul 03, 2012 4:13 pm

Well I'm trying to overcome art block, and the process is going well! I have other pictures besides this and my icon but i just
they are awful. I mean I like them but there are too many mistakes.
Also one uh I'm not sure if the person I made it for would like me to share it? I only made it for her and I didn't really show anyone else. Also there is much inaccuracy in it. fhdsinohfg
Well here is one:
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And the icon is my other.

I'd appreciate critique on both, but keep in mind that the icon is just something like a simple, fun style and is not meant to be all that accurate.
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Tue Jul 03, 2012 4:40 pm

You're icon is really cute, so I really don't have critique. The Terezi drawing's great, but her neck and head sizes feel a bit uncomfortable to me, but overall it's awesome. 8/10
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Tue Jul 03, 2012 4:46 pm

The drawing, the first one (I don't see a second) seems a bit forced on the neck. Like the head is to forward and the neck is too back, try to calm it a little?

The light source is coming from where? Unless if there are multiple light sources, I think the shading is a bit misplaced.

And I know some hands may look like that in real life, but the proportions are kind of.. awkward maybe? But that's pretty much it for me. I don't know if her back is supposed to be straight or if the shirt is supposed to be tight, but I give this a fair 7.8/10
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:06 pm

Ah Abstract, my icon is the other drawing. o:

@Mushroom
Actually, no. Her head size and neck size is accurate. I checked with a few better artists than me and they said it was fine. uvu I appreciate your critique, though!
EDIT: Maybe the way it's placed though..

@Abstract
Anyways, there is just a bigger lightsource and it makes it look like there's two. It's just kind of hard to explain? I'm still really new to color and lightsource, even if it may seem I'm not. Ah yeah..I tried to use a reference but it didn't work out well. :c I'm trying to work on hands so..
Also, her shirt is just tight. I've been doing a lot of loose clothing in art and I haven't really been doing tighter things at all. agSHYGD

Anyways, thank you both! uvu
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:14 pm

Your welcome. Here is a secret I use when I do my hands. I never trace my hand or get a picture, I use my own hand some how and then trace its "shadow" and just see the rest of the details placed on my hand. Or take a snapshot of your arm/hand if possible and see how it works from there. (Photos are so difficult to me, because you can never find the correct one. xD)

But I see.
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:17 pm

The nose sort of makes her look a bit weird to me. I'm trying to overcome artblock too.
THAT STUFF IS HARD TO GET OVER. LIKE A GIANT WALL.
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:57 pm

I like it!
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Tue Jul 03, 2012 9:12 pm

Haha I agree with you, 0strich! And yeah, but, it's what comes to me and it feels natural! Alas, I don't care if they're weird. xD


And thanks, Donut. uvu
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Wed Jul 04, 2012 6:09 pm

I love your style. I think that looks brilliant with the character of Terezi. Art block isn't fun at all, I sympathize...
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Wed Jul 04, 2012 6:14 pm

Wow. I love this. It is great.
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Thu Jul 05, 2012 12:01 am

This is awesome
I really like the terezi one
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Thu Jul 05, 2012 12:12 am

Thank you a lot! uvu
I might start doing a 30 day drawing challenge to help me recover from art block. u__u
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Thu Jul 05, 2012 5:40 am

I love the shading on it and the different dimensions. It's amazing!
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PostSubject: Re: Some art   Thu Jul 05, 2012 2:19 pm

Thank you very much! uvu
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