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emiko
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PostSubject: Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!!   Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!! Icon_minitimeSat Jul 07, 2012 3:20 pm

WARNING! This may be a little inapropiate, but here it goes.


By the way when im saying I in the story, i mean Marceline.

Please read it all!

Open the spoiler.

Oh and by the way at the end of chapter 3, im working on chapter 4.


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PostSubject: Re: Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!!   Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!! Icon_minitimeSat Jul 07, 2012 3:26 pm

GREAT! nott that innapropriate
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PostSubject: Re: Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!!   Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!! Icon_minitimeSat Jul 07, 2012 3:31 pm

Well when marceline's hand got cut off it was kinda innapropiate...
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PostSubject: Re: Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!!   Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!! Icon_minitimeSat Jul 07, 2012 3:43 pm

I like gross stuff lol
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PostSubject: Re: Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!!   Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!! Icon_minitimeSat Jul 07, 2012 4:13 pm

^ lol that.

Some-what interesting. I don't know Adventure Time so well so yeah. The cut off hand part was kind of shocking to me though.

Put more paragraphs though, or please try to separate some lines, it was kind of confusing because it was a "word wall".
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PostSubject: Re: Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!!   Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!! Icon_minitimeSat Jul 07, 2012 4:15 pm

I know, im working on that. ^o^
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PostSubject: Re: Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!!   Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!! Icon_minitimeSat Jul 07, 2012 5:41 pm

nice story! i like adventure time
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PostSubject: Re: Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!!   Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!! Icon_minitimeSat Jul 07, 2012 9:08 pm

Can you PLZ be a little more specific? Not being greedy or anything, but im kinda worrying if you just skipped through. The story is REALLY long.
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