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+7Lenka Harry Melissa H. Rufistar Roc Hijohshiki Donutangel♥ Primrose 11 posters |
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Primrose
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311
Join date : 2011-08-27
Age : 22
Location : District 12
| Subject: My 2nd try at doing a chibi  Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:43 pm | |
| Its just a sketch. The first one is really bad so im not showing it to you. Please rate: - Spoiler:
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Donutangel♥
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 327
Join date : 2012-07-07
Age : 23
Location : ...
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:45 pm | |
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Roc Hijohshiki
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2303
Join date : 2012-05-09
Location : Ah...
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:45 pm | |
| 9/10: Good start and great base!  | |
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Rufistar
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3155
Join date : 2012-06-14
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:49 pm | |
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 23
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:54 pm | |
| the eyes are a bit too high, and shes a bit too skinny
but gresat! | |
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Roc Hijohshiki
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2303
Join date : 2012-05-09
Location : Ah...
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Wed Jul 25, 2012 8:10 pm | |
| - Rufistar wrote:
- What's a chibi?
A chibi is a cute version of something. For example: (My avatar is the original) - Chibi Version:
In my world, chibi is something that has a big head and small body...  | |
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Harry
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 7654
Join date : 2012-07-16
Age : 25
Location : with you ;)
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Wed Jul 25, 2012 8:46 pm | |
| It's a good start, just make the eyes a bit smaller and you'll have a beautiful chibi. :3
8/10
I'm a senior fantagian, yay!
Last edited by Tikaani on Wed Jul 25, 2012 8:47 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : I looked under my post.) | |
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Lenka
Veteran Fantagian
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| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Wed Jul 25, 2012 8:55 pm | |
| Great job! I actually think the eyes are the right size; just make the head more of an oval. Like a fantagian's head. Also make the eyes lower down. Other then that: 8/10! | |
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 23
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Wed Jul 25, 2012 10:09 pm | |
| oh and random chibi fact that'll help you in the future
a chibi's body should be the sixe of TW2 OR LESS chibi heads
i didnt mean to yell if thats what you think the caps are for | |
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taehyung
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3089
Join date : 2011-07-15
Age : 24
Location : somewhere
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Thu Jul 26, 2012 7:59 am | |
| Critiques: The legs are in awkward position Try making them straight. Her head like a ball make it Oval. She has no body curves. Her neck and head are going to the left(By left i mean left hand). Its good. 7/10. Hopefully someone will give you a better critiques  and I know you will improve! | |
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Primrose
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311
Join date : 2011-08-27
Age : 22
Location : District 12
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:32 am | |
| Thank you guys.
I don't know how to finish it so i won't :/ | |
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Likki
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 250
Join date : 2012-07-21
Age : 25
Location : Under your bed
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Thu Jul 26, 2012 3:43 pm | |
| I'd give it a 7/10
Maybe make the eyes and head a bit smaller.
You could also color it in and finish it off
Erase the line in the middle of the face.
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Nobue
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 114
Join date : 2012-01-28
Age : 23
Location : My home
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Thu Jul 26, 2012 10:56 pm | |
| when making the body shape make soft strokes so its easy to erase them when you want to ad the outfit | |
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el
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621
Join date : 2011-07-20
Age : 23
Location : canada
| | Subject: Re: My 2nd try at doing a chibi Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:25 pm | |
| Oooooooh! This is really cute. uvu
I give it a 9/10. Since it is your 2nd chibi, it's not the best. But it's still awfully good for a second try! | |
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