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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| Subject: my fantage creation  Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:13 pm | |
| thanks KK70014 for making those fantage bases! i used them to make this:  i think it is really good. i just need more practice on shading i think. rate and critique please | |
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Primrose
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311
Join date : 2011-08-27
Age : 21
Location : District 12
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:15 pm | |
| I don't know. I'd give it 7/10. You need to practice on shading. | |
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:17 pm | |
| - Andrea~ wrote:
- I don't know. I'd give it 7/10. You need to practice on shading.
i did do more shading on the hair, but it is hard to notice | |
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Roc Hijohshiki
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2303
Join date : 2012-05-09
Location : Ah...
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:21 pm | |
| Great job! I really liked of how the girl is winking and is standing up without her legs crossing. The shading is alright, but it looks perfect to me! | |
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Abstract
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563
Join date : 2010-07-14
Age : 24
Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:26 pm | |
| Alittle more lining. The earrings look a bit odd. is the eye looking up, forward, or down? (Got confused, but I suppose she is looking up). Either way, I give it a 7/10, it's very nice for a recolor.  | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:27 pm | |
| Cute! Its a drawover but I like it |
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:30 pm | |
| - Eve Moonlit wrote:
- Cute! Its a drawover but I like it
how could it be a recolor? there were no clothes and hair before, but thank you for the comment. but still, i would like it if people can still comment (sorry, i don't wanna sound mean) | |
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Snow
Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 11487
Join date : 2012-08-21
Age : 21
Location : Forever young
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 3:00 pm | |
| This is awesome! Not alot of shading but I will give it a 9/10
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Cherry
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3690
Join date : 2012-07-26
Age : 23
Location : Shmwhere
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 4:09 pm | |
| I'm not trying to sound rude but everyone is like "More shading"
SHE drew that hair/clothes herself! It was not a re color!
It is very hard (Well for me)
I give it an 10/10 | |
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mich
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6190
Join date : 2012-06-02
Age : 21
Location : purgatory
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 4:25 pm | |
| this is really good. 9/10 | |
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Lenka
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3929
Join date : 2012-06-17
Location : clap aloNG IF YOU FeeL THA t hapPINESS IS THE //TRUTH//
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 5:11 pm | |
| 8.5/10 AWESOME!!! The black tunic could use some detail, but other then that- GREAT! | |
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Janelle
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4931
Join date : 2011-02-28
Age : 21
Location : ur mom
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 7:06 pm | |
| It's awesome. Like they said work on your shading. Make sure the top has an outline. I'd give it a 8 | |
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A t e l i e r
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 126
Join date : 2011-04-26
Age : 23
Location : Computer chair. Or Apple store. They're the same thing.
| | Subject: Re: my fantage creation Sun Sep 23, 2012 7:13 pm | |
| Two words: shading, and MicrosoftPaint | |
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