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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 23 Location : canada
| Subject: rose lalonde Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:44 pm | |
| um, yeah. i just got my tablet working again! feel free to rate and critique. although, no critiques on the hand and shoulders as i know there are issues with them. and i didn't take much effort into coloring, but ghjslkdghjsd i did the style i was looking for | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:53 pm | |
| This is amazing Just gouges. Actually I think.tje shoulders and hands look fine. Better than anything I could di. I think the nose is a little of and the line in the stomach looks funny I know what it is for, just looks mildly odd. 9/10
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 23 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:01 am | |
| - Ene wrote:
- This is amazing
Just gouges. Actually I think.tje shoulders and hands look fine. Better than anything I could di. I think the nose is a little of and the line in the stomach looks funny I know what it is for, just looks mildly odd. 9/10
O H,,,,,, i just realized how stUPID the stomach looked because of how i put folds into the shirt and how i shaded them uh,,, anYWAY thank you a lot! | |
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Pieee Senior Fantagian
Posts : 313 Join date : 2011-12-10 Location : drowning
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:35 am | |
| wow she looks cool i like her hair | |
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Silver Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4143 Join date : 2012-07-17 Age : 23 Location : In my bedroom contemplating my life choices.
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:01 am | |
| That is really good what kind of tablet did you use? o.o | |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 25 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:08 am | |
| Rose lalonde more like what an actual babe | |
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Magdaleena Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2261 Join date : 2010-04-26 Age : 28 Location : Somewhere in northern Europe. Probably hours ahead of you.
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:32 am | |
| Her body looks really long, and she's missing one of her eyes? Maybe you should try sketching first in order to get the proportions down. I do like the shading style, though! Even if it's sort of shaded in the wrong places. And I also like that eye you did draw. | |
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Cherry Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3690 Join date : 2012-07-26 Age : 24 Location : Shmwhere
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:03 am | |
| That is super good! My only two critiques would be the indent on her stomach? And also her winking eye, But over all 10/10 | |
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oKiwiwolfo Junior Fantagian
Posts : 60 Join date : 2012-10-12 Location : U.K
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 11:22 am | |
| Rose, you seem to have misplaced your eye. Rose. Rose you find your missing globular organ right this instant | |
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FruitCake Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4126 Join date : 2011-05-24 Age : 22 Location : ♫
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:35 pm | |
| wow this is nice and the shading is good! by the way, is she winking or where is the other eye? | |
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swag Regular Fantagian
Posts : 196 Join date : 2010-02-28 Location : swag
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:52 pm | |
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emiko Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3968 Join date : 2012-06-17 Age : 110 Location : london is in jupiter... right? QwQ
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 2:35 pm | |
| - swag wrote:
- needs more swag
Thats rude. I think its awesome, but u shaded a little in the wrong places. And where is the othereye? Other the that..... AWESOME. | |
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Snow Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 11487 Join date : 2012-08-21 Age : 22 Location : Forever young
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:26 pm | |
| This is really good! 9/10 | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:39 pm | |
| Nice! I like her hair! 9/10 I can't tell if she's winking or if you left her other eye on purpose, and the stomach area looks a bit odd. Other than that, its awesommme. |
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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 24 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Sat Nov 03, 2012 2:39 pm | |
| mmm she looks way too long?? i have this problem too, but her torso's too big. also her legs. she's missing an eye, which was intentional, but in this case, doesn't look good. the folds are odd, i know the nose is your style but honestly it doesn't look good. 6/10 | |
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 23 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: rose lalonde Sun Nov 04, 2012 10:05 am | |
| omg sorry about the eye i forgot to add it,,, also i use a bamboo capture and thanks for the critiques!!! uwu | |
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