Elemental Goddess

Subject: Elemental Goddess Wed Nov 07, 2012 7:51 pm

I've been inspired to write a new story ehich I will later make a series out of. If you are going to critique, please be nice, I've been really sensible lately. Typos are because I'm on my kindle, I'll fix them later.

Introduction:
The Elemental Goddess is a woman with the power to control all elements known and unknown to humans. She is the mother of her 12 daughters. This daughters will have to compete for the title of Elemental Goddess after the actual Elemental Goddess passes away.

Chapter 1:

Spoiler:

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Subject: Re: Elemental Goddess Wed Nov 07, 2012 7:56 pm

I'm sorry I'm working on this

Nice so far!

Subject: Re: Elemental Goddess Wed Nov 07, 2012 7:57 pm

Thank you. I'll write it when I'm on my computer tomorrow.

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Its epic, you should have a roleplay about this!

Subject: Re: Elemental Goddess Wed Nov 07, 2012 7:58 pm

Ooh, sounds cool! Just some questions to maybe get you started. Who is the main character? What does she feel about the sisters competing? What do the sisters feel about competing? What do humans know about the goddess?

Subject: Re: Elemental Goddess Wed Nov 07, 2012 8:08 pm

I can't tell who the main character is because there isn't really a main one. All of the sisters and some humans are main. I'm going to tell you he names if some of the sisters. (Don't remember them all.)
Ai, Faith, Haeleigh, Katherine. Oh great, I didn't remember eight names.
A RP? Doesn't it sound more like a singular RP?

Subject: Re: Elemental Goddess Thu Dec 20, 2012 8:52 pm

This seems awesome! Oh, and, who's point of view is it in? the elemental goddess? the 12 daughters? Or is there just a narrator? cyclops

Subject: Re: Elemental Goddess Sun Dec 23, 2012 8:28 am

What's a singular RP? I agree you should make an RP of this because it sounds very interesting so far... I cant wait to read it.[:

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