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Oliver
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PostSubject: Preview. xD   Preview. xD Icon_minitimeSat Jun 12, 2010 1:35 pm

This is a preview of a story im gonna be doing later

And then, as she cried, layed down on her knees.
She was alone.
I needed to help her. I needed to.
"Ho...Hoshi?" I asked her.
No response, she just kept crying.
"Everyone left. Its your turn now."
Hoshi nodded. "Ok..."
She stood up and ruffled her dress.
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PostSubject: Re: Preview. xD   Preview. xD Icon_minitimeSat Jun 12, 2010 1:43 pm

nice! Hoshi reminds me of Yoshi! xD More detail could be added though
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PostSubject: Re: Preview. xD   Preview. xD Icon_minitimeSat Jun 12, 2010 2:00 pm

cant wait for the storyy!
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PostSubject: Re: Preview. xD   Preview. xD Icon_minitimeSat Jun 12, 2010 2:10 pm

Poke, its just a preview, you can't expect much!
Thats a good preview, but for some reason it doesn't quite well catch my attention.
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PostSubject: Re: Preview. xD   Preview. xD Icon_minitimeSat Jun 12, 2010 2:11 pm

Anaira wrote:
Poke, its just a preview, you can't expect much!
Thats a good preview, but for some reason it doesn't quite well catch my attention.
Yah, but it would be cool if more detail was added
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PostSubject: Re: Preview. xD   Preview. xD Icon_minitimeSun Jun 13, 2010 4:04 pm

The thing is, that would spoil part of da story.
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PostSubject: Re: Preview. xD   Preview. xD Icon_minitimeSun Jun 13, 2010 6:32 pm

Kawaii Maker wrote:
The thing is, that would spoil part of da story.
Ohhhh... Oh ok! Can't wait for it to come out!
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