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Oliver
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| Subject: Preview. xD  Sat Jun 12, 2010 1:35 pm | |
| This is a preview of a story im gonna be doing later
And then, as she cried, layed down on her knees.
She was alone.
I needed to help her. I needed to.
"Ho...Hoshi?" I asked her.
No response, she just kept crying.
"Everyone left. Its your turn now."
Hoshi nodded. "Ok..."
She stood up and ruffled her dress. | |
| | | | pokeranger
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| | Subject: Re: Preview. xD Sat Jun 12, 2010 1:43 pm | |
| nice! Hoshi reminds me of Yoshi! xD More detail could be added though | |
| | | | Bloobu
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| | Subject: Re: Preview. xD Sat Jun 12, 2010 2:00 pm | |
| cant wait for the storyy! | |
| | | | Trash
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| | Subject: Re: Preview. xD Sat Jun 12, 2010 2:10 pm | |
| Poke, its just a preview, you can't expect much!
Thats a good preview, but for some reason it doesn't quite well catch my attention. | |
| | | | pokeranger
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| | Subject: Re: Preview. xD Sat Jun 12, 2010 2:11 pm | |
| - Anaira wrote:
- Poke, its just a preview, you can't expect much!
Thats a good preview, but for some reason it doesn't quite well catch my attention. Yah, but it would be cool if more detail was added | |
| | | | Oliver
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| | Subject: Re: Preview. xD Sun Jun 13, 2010 4:04 pm | |
| The thing is, that would spoil part of da story. | |
| | | | pokeranger
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| | Subject: Re: Preview. xD Sun Jun 13, 2010 6:32 pm | |
| - Kawaii Maker wrote:
- The thing is, that would spoil part of da story.
Ohhhh... Oh ok! Can't wait for it to come out! | |
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