~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1

Its adventurous and action....

Anyway, time to start writing!

GASP!

It's back, yay! xD

I wantz moar!

Chapters 16 through 24 are OUT!!! Sage Sharpsul, has to help before it's too late!

pokeranger wrote:

Kawaii Maker wrote:

pokeranger wrote:

Bluerivers wrote:

Why do yew always have pain in your stories?

I think because something connects to life or he just likes pain.... But nice story so far

Pain is a character from Naruto.
o.o
Great job, anyways,

Ohhh... I dont even know Naruto... xDD

Oh yeah, I remember Pain now. XDDDDDD

And:
MOARMOARMOAR.

Chapter 25 is posted! The return of Sage Sharpsul!

*evil opera music*

Sharpsul99 wrote:

Chapter 25 is posted! The return of Sage Sharpsul!

*evil opera music*

lolol.

evil opera music.

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ANYWAYS

MOARMOARMOARMOAR.

Almost every chapter has ''blood'' in it...
But, it's still exciting~

Vallie wrote:

Almost every chapter has ''blood'' in it...
But, it's still exciting~

Loolllll

And thank you.

I wonder when I should post Chapter 26.

Kewl I remember this!

The whole story is finished! Chapters 26-50 were added! Catch Chapter 1 of Sharp the Fantagian #2 today!

Aha, nice ending.
But I know 1 person that dosnt admire chu.
ME! XDDD
and..
YOKO!
woo.
Will she ever appear? (I care not)
Anyways, it was a good story. I exept great things from the sequel. :3

Good jjob, good job, like it very much, but it needs more detail. Not fight detail, characterization! It reads like a shounen manga, which means that feelings aren't that important, but I want my characterization! Like, look at Chuyo or whatever the frog's name was. He was a welll rounded character, with good motivation and even a distinct speech pattern! You need more characters like that, mai boi. Sharp needs some sort of motivation other than "I need to save the world! OMG ANGSTANAGSTANGST!", maybe greed? That'll bring some internal conflict. Same for Pain.

On the other hand, I like the suspence and the story was well-thought out and well-paced. The conflict was a new spin on a cliché idea, and I didn't feel bored ever. Kudos, my friend.

Woot! I can't wait for next story! :3

Wtf, there were 26 chapters yesterday, now 50? Nice job and fast writing, although all your chapters are unbelievably short. :p I don't get the fighting, all you were saying was, "All creation blast" me, "I totally know what that is!" In the next story instead of having one line I wouldn't mind being a warrior chick, who fights with twin sabers. :]

Sharpsul99 wrote:

Chapter 14 and 15 are out!

POLL: What's gonna happen to Fantage?

Wow great story!