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el
Veteran Fantagian
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| Subject: terezi  Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:07 am | |
| umm i drew a long-haired non-blind terezi for my friend sarah! (no, not mod sarah but another friend of mine named sarah) the hair coloring is pretty crappy, but other than that i'm pretty proud of it! feel free to rate 1-10 and critique. uwu  EDIT: also yeah it's messy too, but i've finished something!
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:08 am | |
| That is pretty good. The folds on the shirt look kind of odd though. 9/10, nice! | |
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el
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:10 am | |
| thanks! yeah, i need to work on my folds a bit. althought at the moment i'm focusing more on poses. after that, though, i promise i'll work on folds a bit! | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:11 am | |
| Really cool. I'm not into Homestuck but its really nice and cool.
I just love your art. Its amazing~ |
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Reese
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:11 am | |
| Wow, I really love it! I agree with Christmas Tree though, the sleeves look a bit weird.
But overall, fantastic!
9.5/10 | |
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el
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:12 am | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:13 am | |
| fuko this is really cute!!!! uwu | |
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Oliver
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:14 am | |
| you still need to work on making your bodies a lot shorter, the torso especially.
your faces are improving a bunch though | |
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mich
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:17 am | |
| What Oliver said ^
But it is really cool 9/10
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el
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:18 am | |
| thanks, ani and frost!
and thanks for the critique oliver!
i'm having some anatomy issues, so i'm trying to work on different poses to see if that will eventually help out. i'm also using references! uwu | |
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el
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:21 am | |
| ALSO i forgot to mention that the background isn't mine! it's from here
http://incessantdoodling.deviantart.com/art/Hero-of-Mind-Wallpaper-285886107 | |
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o
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sun Dec 16, 2012 2:32 pm | |
| whoa nice shading eee
also i think you are smart to work on your art one step at a time cause it will really help in the long run! | |
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Abbey
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| | Subject: Re: terezi Sun Dec 16, 2012 5:46 pm | |
| The face is cute, you've improved at faces since I last saw your art. But I think you should continue to work on anatomy (especially proportions, use guidelines if you don't already), that in my opinion, is one of the biggest flaws of your art. It's a good idea to take it one step at a time! | |
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