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Pancakette
Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 613
Join date : 2012-10-05
Age : 24
Location : in bed sleeping
| Subject: First good drawing.  Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:31 am | |
| Lol. Now I look back at my old drawings (Actually they arent that old) and I thought I would draw bad on a tablet but this is really good from my others. Rates?  | |
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: First good drawing. Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:33 am | |
| This is really good. I love the eyes, and the hair looks really cool with all the lines. 9/10 because the end of the shirt looks kind of odd to me. Nice! | |
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Pancakette
Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 613
Join date : 2012-10-05
Age : 24
Location : in bed sleeping
| | Subject: Re: First good drawing. Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:35 am | |
| - Christmas Tree wrote:
- This is really good. I love the eyes, and the hair looks really cool with all the lines. 9/10 because the end of the shirt looks kind of odd to me. Nice!
Yea. Kinda makes her look fat but I didnt feel like doing the whole shirt. owo | |
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Flynn
Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278
Join date : 2012-01-14
Age : 25
Location : The gallows
| | Subject: Re: First good drawing. Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:36 am | |
| The hair and face are good, but she doesn't have any arms.
9.3/10. | |
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mich
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6190
Join date : 2012-06-02
Age : 21
Location : purgatory
| | Subject: Re: First good drawing. Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:39 am | |
| This is a good drawing! ^^ and I agree with Ron, maybe you should add arms. | |
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Reese
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6320
Join date : 2012-11-12
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: First good drawing. Thu Dec 27, 2012 9:19 am | |
| It's so adorable! (One of my favorite drawings from you) ^0^ One thing I would add is arms and make the hair have more texture. | |
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Mr.Noah
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2629
Join date : 2012-06-27
Age : 26
Location : New York
| | Subject: Re: First good drawing. Thu Dec 27, 2012 10:37 am | |
| Maybe she didn't want to add arms ^_^
10/10 this is kawaii | |
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taehyung
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3089
Join date : 2011-07-15
Age : 23
Location : somewhere
| | Subject: Re: First good drawing. Thu Dec 27, 2012 2:30 pm | |
| 7/10
Something annoys me in the picture no offense but mines wayyy worse and horrible.
Maybe it's the hair or eyes?I don't know but something annoys me about it.
but it IS CUTE!! I admit It's cute! | |
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Gabriella
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1181
Join date : 2010-04-10
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: First good drawing. Thu Dec 27, 2012 2:32 pm | |
| Its cute, But i have two complaints. The head is too small. and she needs arms. That's it. It is a good drawing 8.3/10 | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: First good drawing. Thu Dec 27, 2012 3:07 pm | |
| Okay some critique here.
The hair is forced and unnatural, draw the indication of diffrent hair instead of coloring in lines in the hair.
The eyes are kind a creepy, the outline should only be on the eye lid and add the eye whites.
Ithink the color choice is poor, pink looks bad with the olive green in my opinion but that's just me
Otherwise its adorable, and good job! |
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