anatomy practice

yea so i wanted to work on anatomy and idk if i'll finish this or not,,,,,

here a drawing:

rate, critique, and general feedback are welcome!!! (i'd especially love it if you gave me some advice on the t-shirt folds; i couldn't quite figure that out)

okay this is super good. i cant even draw like this. i love they way you drew her face, hair, and arms. my only problem with this is that it seemed that when you were drawing her torso you were going for a more curvy approach. yet when it came time to draw her legs you made them very thin. that doesn't work well, it makes it seem as if her legs are disconnected or something. other than that it was almost perfect. and maybe her bottom lady part(lol) shouldn't
be so..straight it curves up not across.........btw the shirt folds were spot on. it just gets more technical with shading and so on.
any who 9.5/10

sherley739 wrote:

okay this is super good. i cant even draw like this. i love they way you drew her face, hair, and arms. my only problem with this is that it seemed that when you were drawing her torso you were going for a more curvy approach. yet when it came time to draw her legs you made them very thin. that doesn't work well, it makes it seem as if her legs are disconnected or something. other than that it was almost perfect. and maybe her bottom lady part(lol) shouldn't
be so..straight it curves up not across.........btw the shirt folds were spot on. it just gets more technical with shading and so on.
any who 9.5/10

thanks for the critique!! yeah i wanted to try a new style w/ the legs but it didn't work out so well??? haha w/e i'll keep ur suggestions in mind next time!

@nyan cat, thank you so much!

The legs are too far apart and the shoulder may be a bit too pointy but otherwise it's all good!

Also there's something about the head that bothers me but I don't know what.

Rufistar wrote:

The legs are too far apart and the shoulder may be a bit too pointy but otherwise it's all good!

Also there's something about the head that bothers me but I don't know what.

which shoulder?? the one that's going up?

also, yeah i probably made the head too long??? i'll have to work on my head/body proportions; they always throw me off haha

hop wrote:

Rufistar wrote:

The legs are too far apart and the shoulder may be a bit too pointy but otherwise it's all good!

Also there's something about the head that bothers me but I don't know what.

which shoulder?? the one that's going up?

also, yeah i probably made the head too long??? i'll have to work on my head/body proportions; they always throw me off haha

The one that's up yes

I love the folds in her shirt. It is really good! I agree with the leg part though. 9/10.

Rufistar wrote:

hop wrote:

which shoulder?? the one that's going up?

also, yeah i probably made the head too long??? i'll have to work on my head/body proportions; they always throw me off haha

The one that's up yes

yea i see it does look pointy.. thanks for letting me know!

also, thank you christmas tree!!

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i tried

Kyary wrote:

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i tried

Thats improvement./I guess./ it looks better, but in between the legs it goes like a 'V' instead of a 'T'.

Lin wrote:

Kyary wrote:

Spoiler:

i tried

Thats improvement./I guess./ it looks better, but in between the legs it goes like a 'V' instead of a 'T'.

lol she was redlining my drawing (or blue lining since it's blue??)

but @kyary, thanks! yeah that isn't the exact same pose, but it does help with anatomy!!!