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Mr.Noah Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2629 Join date : 2012-06-27 Age : 27 Location : New York
| Subject: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:16 pm | |
| I was in a drawing mood,i'm always in a drawing mood hah & I decided to draw Kyoko because shes my favorite character in Madoka Magica even though she died D: WAH.Anyway,yea so I drew her. Heres the drawing: - Spoiler:
Original Photo: - Spoiler:
PLEASE CRITIQUE AND RATE. ALSO DONT STATE OUT THE OBVIOUS HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE | |
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Reese Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6320 Join date : 2012-11-12 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:18 pm | |
| Good, but her face is sort of flat and off. 6.5/10 | |
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Mr.Noah Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2629 Join date : 2012-06-27 Age : 27 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:22 pm | |
| - Nyan Cat wrote:
- Good, but her face is sort of flat and off. 6.5/10
My opinion:But I think the face is fine,besides the curves and all the messed up lines but thanks for your opinion! :p | |
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aimi Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4743 Join date : 2012-09-02 Age : 23 Location : pledis ent. building
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:36 pm | |
| - Nyan Cat wrote:
- Good, but her face is sort of flat and off. 6.5/10
I agree. The face's position is a bit weird. I'll give it a 7/10. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:39 pm | |
| I love Madoka Magical
Okay so her face, the eyes are too far apart. If this was a simplified chibu or something that would be okay but it looks wrong here. I don't like the way her nose looks but that's just me. The head could be longer too. But I think this us cute |
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Mr.Noah Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2629 Join date : 2012-06-27 Age : 27 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sun Dec 30, 2012 9:40 am | |
| The nose is made how its suppose look like in the photo...Okay then thanks anyway. | |
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x♥Lauryn♥x New Fantagian
Posts : 13 Join date : 2012-12-30
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sun Dec 30, 2012 10:05 am | |
| well the face is long/rectangle like and the bow seems to be off the head but everyone mentioned what is weird so i give it a 9!! | |
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Squirtle Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791 Join date : 2011-12-04 Age : 22 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sun Dec 30, 2012 10:12 am | |
| The face is a little bit wide, but other than that I love it. 9.8/10 | |
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Mr.Noah Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2629 Join date : 2012-06-27 Age : 27 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sun Dec 30, 2012 10:20 am | |
| Thanks Christmas Tree and Lauryn! | |
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Cherry Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3690 Join date : 2012-07-26 Age : 24 Location : Shmwhere
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:21 pm | |
| Good job Noah! 9/10 My only critique is to make the face/chin more pointy and not so flat/round if you know what I mean. | |
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Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 24 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:39 pm | |
| 8.5/10
Like everyone said, the head shape is too wide. The chin. Her right shoulder is not equal to the other shoulder. Try raising shoulder more. (The part in between the shoulder and neck)
It's a cute drawing though, keep practicing. | |
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A t e l i e r Regular Fantagian
Posts : 126 Join date : 2011-04-26 Age : 23 Location : Computer chair. Or Apple store. They're the same thing.
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:28 pm | |
| { - - x .....................try adding colour next time....................... x - - }
7.2/10
lol | |
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Mr.Noah Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2629 Join date : 2012-06-27 Age : 27 Location : New York
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:42 pm | |
| - glitters2335 wrote:
- { - - x .....................try adding colour next time....................... x - - }
7.2/10
lol Its a sketch,I didn't wanna add colour. | |
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Daisy Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3369 Join date : 2011-12-22 Age : 24 Location : In Hell, With Sebastian..
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Tue Jan 08, 2013 4:07 am | |
| So yeah, Ill give it 7/10 Here's some tips for you.. Just look at the picture..~ | |
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o Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4270 Join date : 2011-11-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Wed Jan 09, 2013 4:41 pm | |
| you can't just turn down every single critique you receive when you asked for critique
also nice drawing. I'm not gonna crit since everyone else pretty much covered it.
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