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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: peaches and a strawberry Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:30 pm | |
| hi, im doing this again so its gonna be a comic and its gonna be entirely done in pencil because im extremely lazy x_x her'es the cover its also in pencil because im so lazy ugggh - wowowo:
what's it about, huh? two boys going to a place they used to go to in their childhood a lot. it focuses on a boy named wallace (the tall one in the cover) and a boy named marcelo (shortie), but he's mostly nicknamed peaches. the two just look at it and walk. it'll be pretty short. will be sad, probably uJu when's it gonna update, punk? whenever i want to, honestly... but ill always post when its updated!!! if you tell me to update it helps too. THANKS FOR READING MY COMIC!!!!!! -- - page 1:
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:42 pm | |
| Wow omg this is really cute, i can't wait for it to be updated. I bet its going to be great! |
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YEEZUS Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3579 Join date : 2013-02-16 Age : 16
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:09 pm | |
| Omg, that's adorable. *~* | |
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aimi Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4743 Join date : 2012-09-02 Age : 23 Location : pledis ent. building
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:10 pm | |
| It's so cute~ Can't wait for the update! | |
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Rufistar Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3155 Join date : 2012-06-14
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:11 pm | |
| - Witch wrote:
- Wow omg this is really cute, i can't wait for it to be updated. I bet its going to be great!
Ee-yup! | |
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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:13 pm | |
| first page!! very bad and dum b. - page 1:
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:28 pm | |
| - Oliver wrote:
- also i got kinda excited and made the first page. sorry the handwriting looks so bad, ill try to fix it for next comic.
if you cant read something, tell me u_u""""
- page 1:
Your handwriting isn't that bad, mines worse. And it seems pretty interesting, I can't wait for the next. |
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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:30 pm | |
| yeah!!! thank you very much. i just replaced it with a font??? also looks horrible (even more so, even) but its more readable like im just doing this for fun so don't expect it to be all that great,, U_U but im happy youre enjoying it so far!!! | |
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Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Wed Feb 27, 2013 6:26 am | |
| This is really nice. Maybe you should colour it. | |
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flower Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7482 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Wed Feb 27, 2013 6:53 am | |
| Its so cute! I like how you added the text on the computer. You should Ink it, it would be much more bold. | |
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mich Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6190 Join date : 2012-06-02 Age : 21 Location : purgatory
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:44 pm | |
| This is really interesting! ouo I can't wait for the next page. | |
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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:01 pm | |
| thank you!!!! i might colour it if i ever tsart taking it more seriously, but im a veery lazy person so that'll probably be a while. the text in this page is kinda hard to read, but if you have problems ill help you read it, i guess??? four panels in this page are flashbacks, i hope its easy to tell which but if not ill tell you anyway hope you enjoy - page 2:
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Nctzen127 Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 960 Join date : 2012-06-17 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:04 pm | |
| Seems interesting Good work! | |
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o Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4270 Join date : 2011-11-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:54 pm | |
| this looks like a very fun comic and I am excited to read more! | |
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aimi Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4743 Join date : 2012-09-02 Age : 23 Location : pledis ent. building
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Thu Feb 28, 2013 12:18 am | |
| Please make more soon! I want more of this cute friendship story! | |
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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Sat Mar 02, 2013 9:38 am | |
| the not very awaited third page!! also thank you ah, friendship is so underrated -_- - page 3:
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Squirtle Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791 Join date : 2011-12-04 Age : 21 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Sat Mar 02, 2013 9:49 am | |
| That is really good, it is interesting too. It played a movie in my mind. | |
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Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Sat Mar 02, 2013 11:39 am | |
| - Oliver wrote:
- the not very awaited third page!! also thank you ah, friendship is so underrated -_-
- page 3:
What is that thing in the second panel? I can't tell. | |
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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Sat Mar 02, 2013 11:40 am | |
| its just the place really badly drawn u_u·"" its meant to be a lot of mountains. sorry about that, haha | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:02 pm | |
| - Oliver wrote:
- the not very awaited third page!! also thank you ah, friendship is so underrated -_-
- page 3:
Super adorable as always, can't wait for the next one! |
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Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:03 pm | |
| - Oliver wrote:
- its just the place really badly drawn u_u·"" its meant to be a lot of mountains. sorry about that, haha
Okay, thank you. | |
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aimi Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4743 Join date : 2012-09-02 Age : 23 Location : pledis ent. building
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:32 pm | |
| Soooooo cuteeee! Peaches is really cute too~ | |
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Lenka Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3929 Join date : 2012-06-17 Location : clap aloNG IF YOU FeeL THA t hapPINESS IS THE //TRUTH//
| Subject: Re: peaches and a strawberry Mon Mar 04, 2013 8:46 pm | |
| I love this! This is awesome! I like the art | |
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