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Rufistar
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PostSubject: Quick critique please?   Quick critique please? Icon_minitimeMon Apr 15, 2013 5:03 pm

So I'm drawing a dragon and there's a pose I can't quite figure out.

As you can see, he's hanging upside down from a tree branch like a possum:

I'm not sure if the back legs are supposed to be that way, could anyone please quickly redline the drawing and give tips? I still want the back legs bent though (maybe I'm not sure? Is it natural?).

Any other critiques are appreciated also. Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: Quick critique please?   Quick critique please? Icon_minitimeMon Apr 15, 2013 5:05 pm

the tail looks like you just drew it over the branch, not wrapped it around. Other than that, It's adorable and I can't see anything else wrong with it.

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PostSubject: Re: Quick critique please?   Quick critique please? Icon_minitimeMon Apr 15, 2013 5:06 pm

Dreamer wrote:
the tail looks like you just drew it over the branch, not wrapped it around. Other than that, It's adorable and I can't see anything else wrong with it.


Don't worry, it's the webcam and sketch lines (they won't erase argh).

Here's what it's supposed to look like:

Thanks! c:


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PostSubject: Re: Quick critique please?   Quick critique please? Icon_minitimeMon Apr 15, 2013 5:08 pm

even if the knees are bent, the feet dont go in the front, they go in the back.
this is great though
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