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dewey decimal system Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2743 Join date : 2012-10-30 Age : 22 Location : pm me for tumblr/ig handles ♡
| Subject: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Thu May 02, 2013 5:55 pm | |
| W/e yes I know I said I quit but I really, really, really wanted to share this. It's important - The rap/song:
[rapping]I just want you to care about me I dont want to be judged I just want to be loved I want to cry Sometimes even die Yes I know it ain't right But my oh my These days who cares I'm just a girl in her own little world.. [singing]My oh my Do I even dare to ask you to care? You only like me cause of what... I wear Not how I act Not who I am... All that matters these days is appearance [rapping]I don't got perfect hair Perfect eyes Perfect skin But my oh my My heart is big... I'll listen to your secrets Then of course I'll keep 'em. I'll tell you the truth And I'll be there for you Unlike those girls over there All they worry 'bout is looks... You may be pretty on the inside But not to society; You ain't got the body No your hair's not even shiny [singing]Why do I even try? My oh, my oh, my.
No I didn't finish yet. I'm aware of the many flaws aswell, please don't point them out. I don't want critiques or rates. I just wanted to get this out there. It's pretty much about how I feel about appearance, society, etc... May/may not post a video of me singing/rapping this. Probably not. by the way, this is going to be my last post for a long time. I made a promise that I intend to keep. although I'll still be lurking and answering PMs. of course. Just NOT posting. Also I might not answer some PMs if I don't feel like it. | |
| | | Lord Voldemort Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4705 Join date : 2012-08-28 Age : 24 Location : The dark kingdom and it's shadows.
| Subject: Re: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Thu May 02, 2013 5:58 pm | |
| This is really good. I like it a lot.
On another note..
I know you quit, and you came back.. Although you're technically not here. PLEASE COME BACK? | |
| | | dewey decimal system Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2743 Join date : 2012-10-30 Age : 22 Location : pm me for tumblr/ig handles ♡
| Subject: Re: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Thu May 02, 2013 6:07 pm | |
| - Joy wrote:
- This is really good. I like it a lot.
On another note..
I know you quit, and you came back.. Although you're technically not here. PLEASE COME BACK? Dawww ;^; You're sweet.~ I think right now I really, really need to sort out some things. Like who I am, and who I'm not. I don't want to be the girl who cracks jokes all the time, is pretty full of herself but at the same time extremely insecure&depressed, acts crazy n' happy but on the inside... isn't, or the girl who always sits by herself when others are trying to cheer her up. But I am all of those things. I'm too much of a weird, confusing person. I honestly just do not even understand myself. | |
| | | Squirtle Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791 Join date : 2011-12-04 Age : 21 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: Re: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Thu May 02, 2013 6:35 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Thu May 02, 2013 8:00 pm | |
| I really like it, its beautiful and I can relate to it. It would also be wonderful of you stayed because your a nice person and your my friend and I missed you while you were gone. |
| | | Daisy Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3369 Join date : 2011-12-22 Age : 23 Location : In Hell, With Sebastian..
| Subject: Re: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Thu May 02, 2013 8:29 pm | |
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| | | dewey decimal system Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2743 Join date : 2012-10-30 Age : 22 Location : pm me for tumblr/ig handles ♡
| Subject: Re: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Fri May 03, 2013 5:11 pm | |
| Thank You guys for the kindness Cx I've just wrote another rap/song, this one's about bullying - Spoiler:
[rapping]That girl over there's crying. That boy, right now, emotionally dying. You push everyone around like they're trash, Like the wind, you pull me back... Kick me around like I'm a rock. But not anymore, no not today! I'm gonna stand up. Gonna say "hey"! [singing]You can't do this anymore, 'Cause we're just like you. Yeah everyone in this world, they've got feelings too. You think you're so hot! Well guess what? You're not. You cant bully me no more, It's time I locked that door. [rapping]You tell me that I ain't worth it Not worth a penny or even dirt You tell me I have on a dumb shirt But guess what? Your bullying wont work No not anymore, not today! I'm gonna stand up. Gonna say "hey"! [singing]You walk around this town Like the center of the universe And like everybody's watchin' you. You talk smack behind my back and infront of my face. Doesn't matter where I am, you've got somethin' to say. Now I don't want to hear it... Don't want your words, they're bullets. But you want to know something? I'm learning to dodge.
Not done yet.& I know there are flaws, I'm working on it. | |
| | | Squirtle Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791 Join date : 2011-12-04 Age : 21 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: Re: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Fri May 03, 2013 5:32 pm | |
| I love how you pick nice topics to put songs into! It is really inspiering, keep up the great work! | |
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| Subject: Re: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Fri May 03, 2013 6:23 pm | |
| Your new rap song is cool, I like it. It has a very important meaning and its beautiful. Good job! |
| | | Iku Nagae New Fantagian
Posts : 18 Join date : 2013-05-10 Age : 22 Location : In a cloud
| Subject: Re: Rap/Song I wrote (please read) Sat May 11, 2013 8:59 pm | |
| This is really good! I wish I was as good as you. Sadly for me that will never happen. But anyways Its a cool rap. wel more like a song if you refer to typical rap. | |
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