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PostSubject: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeSun Jun 30, 2013 7:23 pm

I am trying a new drawing style! A more chibi style also I tried using an airbrush to color it this time. Pkease critque I know some of the color is out of the lines please critque on it though.
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PostSubject: Re: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeSun Jun 30, 2013 7:28 pm

Its really cool!!! Though its better not to use airbrush..7.6/10
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PostSubject: Re: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeSun Jun 30, 2013 8:38 pm

Oka wrote:
Its really cool!!! Though its better not to use airbrush..7.6/10
I agree, airbrush isn';t a great tool, but its helpful for highlights!

And your drawing is really cute 6/10 :3
The breasts look kind of odd? But that's just me so ehh XD
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PostSubject: Re: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeSun Jun 30, 2013 8:59 pm

The lineart is a bit shaky, and the breasts and ears look a little bit awkward. Other than that, she's cute. 6/10
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PostSubject: Re: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeSun Jun 30, 2013 9:03 pm

Really cute! It's a little out of proportion, but it's still quite nice. 6.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeMon Jul 01, 2013 6:35 am

. The face is really strange looking, since it's all out of shape.
 . The boobs are all the way up on her shoulders. They should be lower down.
 . When you're drawing chibi style, you'll want to have the eyes really large and wide apart (like your avatar).
 . She should have hair at the back of her head unless she's wearing pigtails.
 . I don't know if this is just me but one ear is smaller than the other. Is that intentional?

Other than that, it's pretty good. 4/10
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PostSubject: Re: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeMon Jul 01, 2013 8:33 am

Another thing I forgot to mention is to try to make her look more cat-like? For example, you just put some cat-ears on her and called her a Kitty. Maybe you could make other details to make her look more feline? Possibly a tail, whiskers, or fur? I don't know, that's just me.
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PostSubject: Re: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeMon Jul 01, 2013 10:25 am

Guy when critiquing please remember these things.

- I am new at drawing
- I just got this tablet still trying to figure it out.
- I have no good art programs because my parents are cheap
- I only have 5 stupid tools on the program to use (pencil, paint, airbrush, fill, eraser)
- I was making a bow on her breast but I forgot to add it.
- the ears are intentionally that big

Okay done
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PostSubject: Re: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeMon Jul 01, 2013 10:38 am

Uhm, for being new at Chibi... 5/10 other than that i like the colors
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PostSubject: Re: Kitty GIrl    Kitty GIrl  Icon_minitimeMon Jul 01, 2013 10:38 am

Moka wrote:
Guy when critiquing please remember these things.

- I am new at drawing
- I just got this tablet still trying to figure it out.
- I have no good art programs because my parents are cheap
- I only have 5 stupid tools on the program to use (pencil, paint, airbrush, fill, eraser)
- I was making a bow on her breast but I forgot to add it.
- the ears are intentionally that big

Okay done


You should have mentioned those things, then. How were we supposed to know? UwU
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