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Colorora Senior Fantagian

Posts : 425 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 15 Location : the land of not telling you
 | Subject: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit ) Fri Oct 18, 2013 5:35 pm | |
| so i made this fantage edit and it's supposed to look like me - Spoiler:
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feel free to rate and critique. P.S updated! took jeff's suggestion
Last edited by colorora on Fri Oct 18, 2013 6:16 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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Flynn Legendary Fantagian

Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 20 Location : The gallows
 | Subject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit ) Fri Oct 18, 2013 5:46 pm | |
| This is pretty good, but I feel like she should have hair on the right side of her head, unless it's shaved. Also, shading would be nice.
6/10 |
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flandre Expert Fantagian

Posts : 2166 Join date : 2013-01-01 Age : 18 Location : why do you even care?
 | Subject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit ) Fri Oct 18, 2013 7:57 pm | |
| it looks a little better with the shading
good try 6/10 |
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Misty Legendary Fantagian

Posts : 11487 Join date : 2012-08-21 Age : 17 Location : :)
 | Subject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit ) Fri Oct 18, 2013 8:03 pm | |
| I think it's ok 5.6/10
Here is a crit:
First off with the hair, to make it neater draw it out with the pencil tool then erase the big line art until it is the smallest it can be ( sorry if u don't understand this I am on my iPad so can't use pictures). Also with the shading try to use at least 6 colors instead of 2 and don't pillow shade or just scribble or out them around..make it neat. Same thing goes with your shirt, pants,and shoes only of you are doing pant, shirt, a d shoes use less colors like at least 3 colors. Also remember dont use 18 different shades of a color or else it will look weird!! |
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Janelle Veteran Fantagian

Posts : 4929 Join date : 2011-02-28 Age : 17 Location : cryin in the club
 | Subject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit ) Fri Oct 18, 2013 9:21 pm | |
| the lines are messy and like what everyone said, you should have shaded it.
6.5/10 |
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Hallow ween Veteran Fantagian

Posts : 3280 Join date : 2011-08-11 Age : 17 Location : RATE THIS LOCATION A 10 OR ELSE... *cracks knuckles*
 | Subject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit ) Sat Oct 19, 2013 2:16 am | |
| I think you should have shaded it more, but 7/10! |
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EGF Regular Fantagian

Posts : 160 Join date : 2012-04-23 Age : 16 Location : Eating my favorite food watching the latest music.
 | Subject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit ) Sat Oct 19, 2013 2:26 am | |
| I think 6/10 It is good but not enough the hair looks a bit lumpy I'm not a pro at Art but....as everyone else said you could have done a bit more shading |
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Colorora Senior Fantagian

Posts : 425 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 15 Location : the land of not telling you
 | Subject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit ) Sat Oct 19, 2013 6:57 am | |
| it was done in paint because i dont want to buy a big pro editing program but ill try and look up tutorials. |
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alison Regular Fantagian

Posts : 229 Join date : 2012-08-02 Age : 20 Location : london
 | Subject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit ) Sat Oct 19, 2013 7:28 am | |
| u don't need to buy a big pro editing program just go on youtube and search up "free photoshop" like do u rly think ppl pay for these things no they don't #cheap |
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