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dewey decimal system Expert Fantagian

Posts : 2743 Join date : 2012-10-30 Age : 18 Location : pm me for tumblr/ig handles ♡
 | Subject: Snippet of a Song I'm Writing with AUDIO Wed Dec 25, 2013 11:32 am | |
| "Superman" I am falling [x8] -spoken- Please catch me I need help, My fragile heart and fragile mind Just can't keep up I need someone To save me now So please, please, please, please Be my superman ----------------------------------------- Audio@ http://vocaroo.com/i/s06qvNoTIWr9 This is a very emotional WIP about a girl //me// who feels like she is falling apart and needs someone to be there for her. I know it doesn't rhyme very well now, but frankly I'm not very worried about that. comment or whatever. |
|  | | Colorora Senior Fantagian

Posts : 425 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 15 Location : the land of not telling you
 | Subject: Re: Snippet of a Song I'm Writing with AUDIO Wed Dec 25, 2013 12:02 pm | |
| great idea but you might wanna shorten the I am falling part to around 4-5. |
|  | | flower Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7482 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 18
 | Subject: Re: Snippet of a Song I'm Writing with AUDIO Wed Dec 25, 2013 1:15 pm | |
| good job bb
this is flower btw |
|  | | hikayamasan353 Senior Fantagian

Posts : 361 Join date : 2013-12-08 Age : 23 Location : Ukraine, K***-ken, K***-shi, ***-ku, ***-chome, 2-3-1
 | Subject: Re: Snippet of a Song I'm Writing with AUDIO Tue Dec 31, 2013 9:19 am | |
| Good idea for a club pop song ^^ |
|  | | emiko Veteran Fantagian

Posts : 3968 Join date : 2012-06-17 Age : 105 Location : london is in jupiter... right? QwQ
 | Subject: Re: Snippet of a Song I'm Writing with AUDIO Tue Dec 31, 2013 3:43 pm | |
| >.< You sing well
Liek Colorora said, shorten the im falling to probably 3-6 times. |
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