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benson
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PostSubject: The fairly odd parents The story part one ( PLEASE COMMENT!)   The fairly odd parents The story part one ( PLEASE COMMENT!) EmptyTue Feb 18, 2014 8:40 pm

The Fairly Oddparents Story Part 1

One day , I came walking thinking about me being a fairy.. hmm .. then when I stopped looking at the ground I was floating , I said " Wait I'am floating?"
I could not believe it , I was floating! I looked around and there it was... the sign ... I was thinking in my mind "OMGOSSSSH" That sign had stopped me thinking " THIS IS FAIRY WORLD!". I looked beautiful .... I asked a familar huge fairy .. " Umm.. Where does Timmy Turner live?" He told me " In Dimmsdale . Why?" I replied back
" Because .. " Then I told him my story. He said " Oh this is bad Timmy Turner might get in love with you"
I gasped.. But I went to Timmy's House , as soon if someone grabbed me .. but .. too late .. Anti - Cosmo grabbed me by the hand I tryed to get free but he didn't let go he said "Well .. Well .. well , nice to meet you Cindy" I asked him " How do you know my name?"
He said " Hmm ... Probably FAN OF FOP?" I laughed nerviously . I let go of him with my magic , I even forgot I had a magic wand ^.^ I kept flying to Timmy's house and I dressed up as a normal human and knocked , Timmy's mom answered and screamed to Timmy " TIMMY SOMEONE IS HERE!" . He thought I was Trixie Tang because he looked at me like he was in love... Then I went inside of Timmy's house and hurried to his room. I turned into a Fairy back there Timmy said " YOU'RE A FAIRY GOD PARENT TOO?!!" I told him " Yea I guess?"
Then Wanda came up to me and hugged me I said " Um I think I know you but I'm not you're friend!" She replied to me " OF COURSE YOU ARE!" Timmy was confused ..
Wanda told Timmy that I was her friend and her Godchild
I told Wanda... " Wait.... Ashely was me???!!" Wanda said " Opps probably Jorgan made you forgot the past of Godchild ^.^" Then I looked at Cosmo and remembered that I use to be his girlfriend...

To be Continuted
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It's a pretty nice story. I am not an expert in grammar or spelling. I think it gets a bit confusing but please keep working on it.
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Thank you Smile
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Nicee ^^ Why Tim Turner's parents are kinda suspicious at yourself being a fairy rather than normal human?
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It's.. interesting. Well written. The plot is unusual, but cool. The grammar could use some work. Other than that, it is really good!  Very Happy
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This story is a hot mess. its all over the place and junk like ew
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