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churro Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 974 Join date : 2012-08-17 Age : 20 Location : matsu's head
| Subject: The fairly odd parents The story part one ( PLEASE COMMENT!) Tue Feb 18, 2014 8:40 pm | |
| The Fairly Oddparents Story Part 1
One day , I came walking thinking about me being a fairy.. hmm .. then when I stopped looking at the ground I was floating , I said " Wait I'am floating?" I could not believe it , I was floating! I looked around and there it was... the sign ... I was thinking in my mind "OMGOSSSSH" That sign had stopped me thinking " THIS IS FAIRY WORLD!". I looked beautiful .... I asked a familar huge fairy .. " Umm.. Where does Timmy Turner live?" He told me " In Dimmsdale . Why?" I replied back " Because .. " Then I told him my story. He said " Oh this is bad Timmy Turner might get in love with you" I gasped.. But I went to Timmy's House , as soon if someone grabbed me .. but .. too late .. Anti - Cosmo grabbed me by the hand I tryed to get free but he didn't let go he said "Well .. Well .. well , nice to meet you Cindy" I asked him " How do you know my name?" He said " Hmm ... Probably FAN OF FOP?" I laughed nerviously . I let go of him with my magic , I even forgot I had a magic wand ^.^ I kept flying to Timmy's house and I dressed up as a normal human and knocked , Timmy's mom answered and screamed to Timmy " TIMMY SOMEONE IS HERE!" . He thought I was Trixie Tang because he looked at me like he was in love... Then I went inside of Timmy's house and hurried to his room. I turned into a Fairy back there Timmy said " YOU'RE A FAIRY GOD PARENT TOO?!!" I told him " Yea I guess?" Then Wanda came up to me and hugged me I said " Um I think I know you but I'm not you're friend!" She replied to me " OF COURSE YOU ARE!" Timmy was confused .. Wanda told Timmy that I was her friend and her Godchild I told Wanda... " Wait.... Ashely was me???!!" Wanda said " Opps probably Jorgan made you forgot the past of Godchild ^.^" Then I looked at Cosmo and remembered that I use to be his girlfriend...
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| | | Silver Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4143 Join date : 2012-07-17 Age : 22 Location : In my bedroom contemplating my life choices.
| Subject: Re: The fairly odd parents The story part one ( PLEASE COMMENT!) Sun Feb 23, 2014 4:00 pm | |
| It's a pretty nice story. I am not an expert in grammar or spelling. I think it gets a bit confusing but please keep working on it. | |
| | | churro Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 974 Join date : 2012-08-17 Age : 20 Location : matsu's head
| Subject: Re: The fairly odd parents The story part one ( PLEASE COMMENT!) Sun Feb 23, 2014 7:00 pm | |
| Thank you | |
| | | hikayamasan353 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 362 Join date : 2013-12-08 Age : 28 Location : Ukraine, K***-ken, K***-shi, ***-ku, ***-chome, 2-3-1
| Subject: Re: The fairly odd parents The story part one ( PLEASE COMMENT!) Wed Mar 26, 2014 2:19 am | |
| Nicee ^^ Why Tim Turner's parents are kinda suspicious at yourself being a fairy rather than normal human? | |
| | | daddi Senior Fantagian
Posts : 463 Join date : 2014-12-14 Age : 21 Location : alaska
| Subject: Re: The fairly odd parents The story part one ( PLEASE COMMENT!) Sat Dec 27, 2014 8:48 pm | |
| It's.. interesting. Well written. The plot is unusual, but cool. The grammar could use some work. Other than that, it is really good! | |
| | | cake 2.0 Junior Fantagian
Posts : 88 Join date : 2011-11-09 Age : 21 Location : being on ff w the username xxcakexx
| Subject: Re: The fairly odd parents The story part one ( PLEASE COMMENT!) Sun Dec 28, 2014 12:28 pm | |
| This story is a hot mess. its all over the place and junk like ew | |
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