Posts : 65 Join date : 2014-04-29 Age : 25 Location : Behind your cabinet. Or maybe in your air vent.
Subject: Here's a poem. Have a cookie. Thu May 22, 2014 5:09 pm
~Sorry, but I deleted this.
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Squirtle Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791 Join date : 2011-12-04 Age : 22 Location : Somewhere
Subject: Re: Here's a poem. Have a cookie. Thu May 22, 2014 7:04 pm
That was amazing! I could not make a poem that good. Sorry, I don't have any critiques. There is no grammar problems that I can see, and the poem is very creative. Though I am guessing that someone else will come up with something to say.
Icarus Fell Junior Fantagian
Posts : 65 Join date : 2014-04-29 Age : 25 Location : Behind your cabinet. Or maybe in your air vent.
Subject: Re: Here's a poem. Have a cookie. Thu May 22, 2014 7:22 pm
^.^ Hmkay, thank you! Here's your antidote to the poison cookie still: *gives antidote*.
Cat Rookie Fantagian
Posts : 40 Join date : 2014-03-21 Age : 26 Location : I won't tell you.
Subject: Re: Here's a poem. Have a cookie. Fri May 23, 2014 5:55 am
Nice poem! It almost made me cry. Keep up the good work, Icarus!
Icarus Fell Junior Fantagian
Posts : 65 Join date : 2014-04-29 Age : 25 Location : Behind your cabinet. Or maybe in your air vent.
Subject: Re: Here's a poem. Have a cookie. Fri May 23, 2014 11:59 am
Thank you very much!
Here's the antidote for the poison cookie: *gives antidote*.
Thu May 22, 2014 5:09 pm
