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Karen
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| Subject: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] ![Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Icon_minitime](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_minitime.gif) Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:54 am | |
| SOME CHAPTERS HERE ARE COMPLETELY TRUE FROM THE PAST. I WILL NOTE WHICH CHAPTERS ARE TRUE OR NOT. About the story:- Spoiler:
Fantage used to be a wonderful place, everyone hanging out, no fights, no drama, and members and nons never apart. Then one day, it changed. When all the new updates happened, and premium members usually got the spotlight, everything went wrong. Terribly wrong... This is the story about how members and non members were friends, but split up one day. (This story is like Racism, example: In the old days: Premiums=White people Nons=Black (Sorry if this offends you this is just an example Dx))
Chapter 1:- Spoiler:
My name is Riceyella Narouki. I am a non member on Fantage, and right now it's around August 2010, the month after I joined in 2008! Well I am going to tell you a story about what happened around 2009-2010 that was in the past, with the good times, and bad times... -------- -FEBRUARY 7TH, 2009-Location: The Beach"OMG! IT'S RIC!!! YOUR LIKE, FAMOUS!" A random member said in excitement.
"O.O" Ric8 said, dumbfounded. I hadn't known I was famous, at all. I thought I was just another random Fantagian roaming the streets of White Seal, hanging out with non-member friends. I was so shocked because this was the first time a random premium member actually talked to me like that... Like an equal. "Ahem, I'm Ric's bestie xD" My bestie, Qwerty1234 said in a braggish tone, but I knew she was joking with the member. "Well bye." The member said, and just hovered away as if spoiled into Sunblock. "Wow, that was awkward." Qwerty sighed. We had always wished for members to think of us like an equal. We made a pact that we would always stay friends, even when one of us become a member or something... "Ahh well I gtg!" Qwerty said in an annoyed voice, "My mom is calling me. LOL She's mad. Byeee Riccy!" she waved in good-bye. "Bye Qwerty!!" I answered as she disappeared from view. "I guess I'll just earn some starS..." I said as I hovered away from the Beach's crowd, and transported to the Wizard's Domain to play a new game of Staries, to earn gems AND starS. I was proud to be one of the few non members to get on the list of highscores! But it didn't matter to anybody else, it just mattered that members got better stuff, or got their level to get higher way faster then us, non members. It was racism. Racism on an online game with children... [TRUE]-The next day-
Location: Downtown
Qwerty wasn't on, and so wasn't my other friend, Angelgrl42. So I decided to go Downtown to see if I could make any other friends. "Heyy Serg!" I overheard two premium members talking to this guy, Sergio99. "Hey Amp. Hey Camp." He answered to the girls. Camp... That's familiar... Oh yeah! She joined my website, Fantage Club! Camprockzzz... I guess that's her! I guess I'll introduce myself to her and her friends. I hovered toward them slowly, and spoke. "Hi! I'm Ric." I introduced myself. "Oh hey! Aren't you Ric from Fantage Club? I love your site." The girl Camprockzzz said with enthusiasm. "Thanks" I answered. So far I'm being treated equally. This rocks. "Hey. I'm Sergio." Sergio99 said. "And I'm Amparito!" the girl with the name Amparito2 introduced herself too. "Hey I'm Ric." I said to them. And after that moment, they were officially my besties... Wow... Sometimes dreams do come true. [TRUE]
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Nakira
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:08 am | |
| It seems really good! The whole racism thing is how I interpret the Nons/Premiums relationship as well, so I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks of it that way. X3 *high five*
LOL, this is the second time mentioned me in their topic. The first was when Freedom 4Eva said she didn't mean to do something like me (I don't quite remember) and this is the second time. Is my username fun to type or something? XD /offtopic
Anyways, I hope to see you update soon. ^_^ | |
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Bloobu
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:39 am | |
| sounds exciting ^^ u BETTER finish it XD | |
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Karen
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:56 am | |
| Yup. I'll try, but I'm Canada for Vacation so it might be hard xD | |
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Lyli
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:05 am | |
| What about betas? xD JK
Anyway, this sounds awesome. I can't wait for more [: | |
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Karen
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:14 pm | |
| Yah, I'm gonna try to get the chapter done today but I need internet. (If your wondering how I'm on I'm on my mom's laptop and its hard to use because its old-ish...) | |
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Nakira
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:46 pm | |
| Ah, I see. Well, can't wait for more! ^_^ | |
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Karen
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:47 am | |
| I will try to make the chapter tonight or tomorrow (; I just got back from Canada | |
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Nakira
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sat Aug 21, 2010 1:31 am | |
| Seems pretty good so far, I hope you can write more soon. :3 | |
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Karen
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:08 pm | |
| Yeah, this is a true story so far. The member saying OMG, Qwerty bragging but really joking with the member, Camp, Amp, when they weren't famous, and Sergio meeting me the first time. Bestiez xD | |
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Oliver
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:11 pm | |
| Sergio had a account called sergio99?
:O
I thought he was Sergio999. | |
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Karen
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:13 pm | |
| He's Sergio99 for sure. Well I'm not sure. Sometimes I get confused. LOL | |
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Oliver
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:17 pm | |
| I also had a higher veteran medal than him... and I registered in like, july.
(2009)
So, eto! X3 | |
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Karen
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:23 pm | |
| ROFL I messed the times up, I met them in like, september or November 2009. | |
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Oliver
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:24 pm | |
| - Ricerz wrote:
- ROFL I messed the times up, I met them in like, september or November 2009.
Oh..Okay. XDDDDD | |
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Nakira
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:08 am | |
| When will you update this story? :3 | |
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αяу
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:54 am | |
| Very good, but your stories need work...
All your prolouges are like
1.''She met a boy, he played along, he was the best thing in her life, and she thought she was the one, but she was so wrong.''
2. 'He thought his school would be easy, but he was wrong, very wrong''
Different storiess? | |
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foreveran
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| | Subject: Re: Story: [A Fantage Fantasy - I wish!] Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:01 am | |
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