Subject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #3- The Pain Within Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:17 am
I do not know why, but this is one of my favorite stories. Although, give your character an error, like, for example, he could trip (fall down) alot, meaning when he uses his ''powers'' to jump on a tree he may fail many ties because he falls alot? I dont know. 10/10
Sharpsul99 Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 755 Join date : 2010-06-10 Location : Dark Village
Subject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #3- The Pain Within Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:45 am
New chapters today. New characters are coming in and I might ask for more people soon.
Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:17 am
