yvonnelol Senior Fantagian
Posts : 346 Join date : 2010-03-20 Location : This is a new episode of Punk'd.
| Subject: Dark & Innocent Dreams Sat Jan 15, 2011 12:30 pm | |
| Here's a story about dreams. You could critique, judge, etc. This is only one story, no chapters. Ok, well, ENJOY!! :DD - Spoiler:
2 girls named Ansula (on-sool-uh) and Kimberly, sisters, are sleeping, but it was only 6:00pm. An evil monster/mosquito named Dabula (day-byoo-luh) makes a machine, a dream machine. The machine makes all dreams into nightmares, scary nightmares. Ansula and Kimberly were dreaming, or....the machine might be on right now. The 2 girls had nightmares, frightening ones. Their mother yelled, "DINNER!!". They both went downstairs and ate their dinner. Ansula didn't want to eat her dinner, she was too scared to. After dinner, Dabula's machine was off. The sisters went back to sleep. They woke up, brushed their teeth, got dressed, ate breakfast, then walked to school. Their friends, Erin and Derin, male twins/sorcerers, walked by and had a conversation about dreams and nightmares. "Me and Kimberly were dreaming but all we had was nightmares popping up in our dreams. They were scary," said Ansula, "and frightening." Erin and Derin thought that something was suspicious. They both said, at the same time, "We'll help you!" After school, the twins were looking up on the computer, "nightmares", then they clicked on somthing that said "Destroying Dreams into Nightmares". It had lots of information about Dabula's machine. Erin and Derin both went to Dabula's lab and asked him about his machine. "Why are you destroying the world's dreams?!" Derin asked, in a loud way. "Hehehehe. I don't care about the world's lame dreams! They are so romantic! I HATE ROMANTIC!" Dabula explained. He slammed the door closed, so Erin and Derin used their powers to get inside, but it didn't work. Dabula is too powerful, like a wolf. So, the twins went to their lair and grabbed their powerful potion to make their powers more powerful, more powerful than EVER. The twins got inside, with their sorcerer powers. "How did you get inside my house?!?!?!?!" Dabula exclaimed, and also asked. "No time for questions!" the twins said. "Destroy that machine or die!" "Hehehe. What clever, young men. We must?" Dabula said. Twins said, "We shall duel for the machine." Dabula agreed, so they were fighting with both their powers. BAM! POW! BOOM! OUCH! SCRATCH! OWWW! What pain they were making. The twins were panting very much, they were tired. "Quit?" Dabula said. "We must not quit!" the twins said. They were fighting again! POW! BAM! OUCH! The twins lost, they got scars, panting very badly, and coughing very much. Dabula kicked them out, and left them on the ground. What poor twins they were. "We only have one weapon left, it's Curse." said Erin. He called Curse, the one who curses devil-liked people/mosquitoes, who is also a powerful, powerful, sorcerer. Curse appeared in Dabula's lab. He cursed him, yes, he did, Dabula was in a cage covered with mosquitoes, rats, and spiders, that carries diseases and venom. Dabula finally was unconscious when he was bitten by the mosquitoes and spiders. Curse also destroyed the machine. Erin and Derin vanished to Ansula and Kimberly's house and both said, "He's gone."
The End.
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sahilin Senior Fantagian
Posts : 356 Join date : 2010-11-01 Location : Good Question.
| Subject: Re: Dark & Innocent Dreams Sat Jan 15, 2011 2:58 pm | |
| Wow that was epic! It. was. genius!! I love the middle part!
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Milly Rookie Fantagian
Posts : 41 Join date : 2011-01-15
| Subject: Re: Dark & Innocent Dreams Sat Jan 15, 2011 4:41 pm | |
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Milly Rookie Fantagian
Posts : 41 Join date : 2011-01-15
| Subject: Re: Dark & Innocent Dreams Sat Jan 15, 2011 4:41 pm | |
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