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Are You Best At Poems Or Storys? | Poems | | 30% | [ 3 ] | Storys | | 60% | [ 6 ] | Both | | 10% | [ 1 ] |
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S Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1417 Join date : 2010-02-06 Age : 19 Location : sad town
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:55 pm | |
| Enrollment For Students: Fantage Name: I don't play anymore, so I don't feel the need to tell. Gender: Female Likes: Ana, Europe, Hetalia, Art, my friend Ally, Cymidei (YES H*** 8D), Math, Maturity, Odd personalities, all of my favorite novels, uhm... Dislikes: Immature Kiddo's, Narutards, Over religious people... Need To Learn To Write Poems, Stories Or Both: I'm having a strange feeling of doubt of being taught by one who capitalizes every word, but... oh dear, I honestly don't know what to learn, so lets say I'm here for the ride. :] ~~
Also I do indeed believe you have misused "Showen," which should be "Shown," As I am assuming you are not an old English poet. | |
| | | Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Tue Feb 15, 2011 5:48 pm | |
| @ ~A~:maybe i just like caps lock and want all words to feel special XP | |
| | | Nakira Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1137 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 27 Location : the groan zone
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:52 pm | |
| - Relora wrote:
- @ ~A~:maybe i just like caps lock and want all words to feel special XP
She was referring to Snookie, not you. X3 | |
| | | Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:26 pm | |
| oh lol just where the post was at and how i capsed sum of my words that could easily been mistaken | |
| | | Makkine Moderator
Posts : 2772 Join date : 2010-05-17 Age : 26 Location : Woah
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Wed Feb 16, 2011 4:05 pm | |
| - Russia wrote:
- So, what do teachers do? Can they edit/grade student stories/poems? Can they teach lessons? ^_^
I'm not sure, but Freedom will PM me her poem once she's finished. Try to get students, maybe? Oh no wait, I have an idea. That will require me to ORGANIZE EVERYTHING again. But oh well. | |
| | | Bluerivers Regular Fantagian
Posts : 234 Join date : 2011-01-19
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Wed Feb 16, 2011 4:31 pm | |
| no offense but this is a dumb idea
no one told you that you were the secretary of writing
-poopooface- | |
| | | Nakira Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1137 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 27 Location : the groan zone
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:51 pm | |
| I think it's a pretty good idea. Snookie herself isn't doing all of the teaching, there are others on here who teach too. C: | |
| | | Snookie New Fantagian
Posts : 12 Join date : 2011-02-11 Age : 22 Location : New Zealand
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Sat Feb 19, 2011 4:16 pm | |
| It Just Makes The Text Look Better To Me X3 | |
| | | Nakira Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1137 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 27 Location : the groan zone
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:06 pm | |
| - Snookie wrote:
- It Just Makes The Text Look Better To Me X3
Will we be teaching lessons in PM's or on the thread? | |
| | | bladerunner22 Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 530 Join date : 2010-11-27 Age : 24 Location : Asia
| Subject: Re: ♥ Snookie's Writing School ♥ Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:20 am | |
| ARG!!! I POSTED THIS LIKE 2 TIMES ALREADY!! .. Okay, here is the story for the test... - Spoiler:
“Skipping, skipping, dance around! Then we will all fall down! Yippee!” 5 year old Karla sang, as she skipped along, her dark brown hair bouncing up and down. She was wearing a nice, pink sweater with jeans. Today, it was foggy, winter morning, and everywhere you looked, there was a white blanket covering the village. In her safe neighborhood, she was free to roam around the small village. She saw an old lady, dressed in her bright yellow clothes, strolling around. “Hi, Mrs. Peper (Pepper)!” she said to Mrs. Peper, pronouncing it as peeper. “Hello, dear!” she said, as Karla skipped by.
Karla skipped to her usual playing spot, the playground where stray animals wander. The playground was often called the Rainbow Park, because the slides, swings, benches, etc. were all colorful. She loved to play here, by herself or with the animals. Lately, she hadn’t seen any animals though. She wondered what happened to the animals that used to roam around this fun place. Today, the playground was sprinkled with water from the earlier rain that came. She walked up the steps and slid down the slide, being careful not to get her butt wet. Then she walked carefully through the muddy, wet grass to go home, when suddenly she heard a stomping noise that didn’t come from her own feet. She turned to look behind her, her hair getting in the way. She brushed it off her face and behind her ears to look at what had come.
A dark figure appeared in the fog, but it was hard to make out what it was. The fog made it harder to see. It stood a few feet away from her face. It started walking toward her. “Hmm, who is it today?” Karla said joyfully. “Grrrr.” The creature replied. “Um, hello?” Karla said, being cautious. Suddenly, the figure jumped from the fog and made Karla scream. She backed away from where she was standing, scared by the creature. She heard it say a soft “meow” and realized it was just a poor, black cat. The cat licked its paws and meowed again, and Karla seemed to understand it wanted food. Karla walked closer to the cat, watching it roll in the dirty mud. It meowed joyfully, rolling in the fresh, brown, wet mud. Karla fished into her jean pocket to look for a biscuit she had got from her mother a few minutes earlier.
But then, it turned aggressive again and the purr turned into a growl. It shook the mud off like how a dog might shake off water. Its tail rose straight up as it progressed towards Karla. Karla backed up again, and tripped over a rock, falling to the cold, hard ground with her back. She screamed as she started falling to the floor. The fog started clearing. She had seen her life flash before her eyes before she felt something soft and warm on her back. It hoisted her back up, making her stand up. “Huh?” she asked, not specifically to anyone. The cat was gone and the fog had disappeared. Muddy, but clear footsteps were left in the mud, the cat’s and another creature’s feet on top of another. The wind blew some black cat fur away, proving that this was no dream.
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