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PostSubject: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeFri Jun 17, 2011 3:33 pm

Anyone like Shugo Chara?
Anyway, this is my W.I.P.(wip means WORK, IN PROGRESS.) So don't ask me why stuff is missing, etc.
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Don't rate. Don't tell me how to improve. I'm not looking for any of that.
thanks(:
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeFri Jun 17, 2011 3:36 pm

Hm, I shall give constructive criticism.

The eyes are too far apart.
You need to work on the shading.
Nose?
Legs look a little short.

Other than that, I think it's quite nice. it's just a work in progress, yes I know.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeFri Jun 17, 2011 3:48 pm


-I think the eyes look okay maybe a bit closer and maybe a bit higher on the face,but no ones perfect.Even in the world or art.So I don't find that to bad.
-This is a work in progress so I understand the lack of shading.
-There is a nose I just noticed it's just one of the flat line ones.
-The legs are a bit short in proportion to the body you might want to fix it before you finish it all.

Other than that it's very nice I can't wait to see it when it's finished.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeFri Jun 17, 2011 3:49 pm

WHAT DID I TELL YOU---
DO NONE PEOPLE READ?!
Lol. just kidding.
1. I tried to put the eyes in the best way possible, but since the face is small thats the closest I can make them without looking like she was in a nuclear bomb attack.
2. Shading? I haven't even colored it yet.
3. Nose. It's there. The skin color is there.It's there because I needed t for other things, I'm gonna change the skin tones later. (yellow human. HAH.)
4. ITS A CHIBI WHAT DO YOU EXPECT.

oh and im sorry if this seemed rude. i'm rude. xD
I have irl anger issues, im sorreh D:
but thanks, i guess.
FFFFFFFFFF-
SORRY! D:
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeFri Jun 17, 2011 3:53 pm

oh sorry I read it all just didn't see those sentences under the picture, my bad.

I thought it was a chibi....


Last edited by Relora on Fri Jun 17, 2011 4:19 pm; edited 1 time in total
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeFri Jun 17, 2011 4:05 pm

It looks nice! I would love to see the finished version.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeFri Jun 17, 2011 4:06 pm

shugo chara<3
looks great 8D
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSat Jun 18, 2011 3:34 pm

I SAW THIS ON FACEBOOK
is awesome
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSat Jun 18, 2011 3:49 pm

Abbey wrote:
I SAW THIS ON FACEBOOK
is awesome

So you're saying she put this up on Fb too or that she copied it? :/
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSat Jun 18, 2011 4:04 pm

Mitsuki wrote:
Abbey wrote:
I SAW THIS ON FACEBOOK
is awesome

So you're saying she put this up on Fb too or that she copied it? :/
She put it on Facebook.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSat Jun 18, 2011 4:08 pm

Abbey wrote:
Mitsuki wrote:
Abbey wrote:
I SAW THIS ON FACEBOOK
is awesome

So you're saying she put this up on Fb too or that she copied it? :/
She put it on Facebook.

Ohh ok, sorry Razz
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSat Jun 18, 2011 4:48 pm

Its beautiful (: I cant even do this!
I'm jealous D:<
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSat Jun 18, 2011 5:06 pm

i do not..copy..pshh... xD
here's it so far.
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I still gotta edit, shade,& color it some more.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSat Jun 18, 2011 6:34 pm

A wrote:
i do not..copy..pshh... xD
here's it so far.
le woosh Weee11

I still gotta edit, shade,& color it some more.

It looks very pweety!!! Cool Cool not everyone has amazing talents like u!!
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSat Jun 18, 2011 9:47 pm

It all is coming together I like it ^^
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSun Jun 19, 2011 2:56 pm

Thanks ^^(:
I don't have alot of talent.
There are some days where i can draw greatly, and other days were i cant draw at all C:
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSun Jun 19, 2011 3:52 pm

It's coming together nicely!

I see the nose! I guess the skin tone before was just too light for me to see it.

Good job
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSun Jun 19, 2011 6:27 pm

haha yeah, i just needed a bright color on the skin in the start so i could distinguish from the white background
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSun Jun 19, 2011 7:13 pm

A wrote:
Thanks ^^(:
I don't have alot of talent.
There are some days where i can draw greatly, and other days were i cant draw at all C:

I know right? Even if you don't have enough talent hun,All you need is motivation. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeSun Jun 19, 2011 9:07 pm

I love her eyes!
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 3:55 am

it looks ok i suppose Smile
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   le woosh Icon_minitimeMon Jun 20, 2011 1:06 pm

YAY SHUGO CHARA XD
As always your work is perfect x3 It's so cute!
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