[Ani's Art Topic] Closed for Now

Give it all you got. ;]

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Her eyes are spread out correctly if I I'm correct but they seem a bit odd/disproportional. Her hair seems to be styled unnaturally and is a bit disproportionate. Other than that pretty good 6.5/10 when compared to the real anime girl chibi
7/10 for trying

Nice job~ 6.5/10

The hair is fine but her body is disporpotional..other than that its ok. Try shading bits
6/10

I really like it 7/10

7/10 its good!

I like it only 1 eye is way higher than the other, and don't get me wrong but isn't she supposed to have hair Barretts? >.< Also the hair is higher on one side than the other, like high enough it's noticeable. Nice try though! 8/10.

7 oh and P.S BASEBALLL

Thanks xD

Yeah, I drew this at 3 am and coloured it at 8.

Yes, I was trying to copy a picture [Avatar]. My pc is double screened, so it's alot easier. xD

I forgot the barrets. Lmao but they're a small detail and I can always add it on.

I'm going to critique this, and be honest. I hope you don't mind.

The hair is too long in some spots and it wasn't drawn well.
Her head is literally humongous compared to her body size.
As far as chibis go, the head shape is good.
The left eye, I'm sorry, turned out really bad. It needs to be moved down, and it's far too small compared to the other eye.
The bow turned out pretty well.

The body needs a lot of work. The proportions are bad.

You should try shading, and cleaning the outlines.
If you clean the outlines it will look better.
Shading is not that hard, you just need to figure out where the light source is.

I'm sorry if I offended you in any way. It was only to help you improve.
For more tips try looking at art tutorials and studying other pictures.
It'll help, trust me. [;

-Munny

cute and i <3 it xD but you should work on

-Making it more straight
-the feet aren't really the same size.
-one eye is bigger then the other
-and so are the arm lenghts
-i kinda think the colors are too bright and flashy -.- sorry but i don't like those colors

over all you still did a out standing job

Munny wrote:

I'm going to critique this, and be honest. I hope you don't mind.

The hair is too long in some spots and it wasn't drawn well.
Her head is literally humongous compared to her body size.
As far as chibis go, the head shape is good.
The left eye, I'm sorry, turned out really bad. It needs to be moved down, and it's far too small compared to the other eye.
The bow turned out pretty well.

The body needs a lot of work. The proportions are bad.

You should try shading, and cleaning the outlines.
If you clean the outlines it will look better.
Shading is not that hard, you just need to figure out where the light source is.

I'm sorry if I offended you in any way. It was only to help you improve.
For more tips try looking at art tutorials and studying other pictures.
It'll help, trust me. [;

-Munny

Sorry...but..
You seem as if you can do better.
Not to start a fight.

Munny wrote:

I'm going to critique this, and be honest. I hope you don't mind.

The hair is too long in some spots and it wasn't drawn well.
Her head is literally humongous compared to her body size.
As far as chibis go, the head shape is good.
The left eye, I'm sorry, turned out really bad. It needs to be moved down, and it's far too small compared to the other eye.
The bow turned out pretty well.

The body needs a lot of work. The proportions are bad.

You should try shading, and cleaning the outlines.
If you clean the outlines it will look better.
Shading is not that hard, you just need to figure out where the light source is.

I'm sorry if I offended you in any way. It was only to help you improve.
For more tips try looking at art tutorials and studying other pictures.
It'll help, trust me. [;

-Munny

I actually like critiques alot more than ratings. xD Thanks I'll try to improve; messages like this always make me feel better about my art. ^u^

7.5/10 very good job xD

I think she means it when she said 'closed.' o.o

^sorry I know it's closed but I can't resist saying that it's awesome xP 8/10

awsome picture

Finn wrote:

Sorry...but..
You seem as if you can do better.
Not to start a fight.

Because I can. I've been drawing for years.
I'll set my avatar as one of my drawings.

EDIT:
I set it. Ignore the "Play" button, it's from Flipnote Hatena for the DSi - I uploaded it to the website and screenshotted it from my computer. It's kind of old, too.

Ani wrote:

I actually like critiques alot more than ratings. xD Thanks I'll try to improve; messages like this always make me feel better about my art. ^u^

You're welcome (x
Glad to help. c;