my picture

plz rate it 1/10 and no bad comments plz i was in a rush

Spoiler:

Would critiscism count as a "bad comment" Because once when I was giving critique, it ended up offending someone. So I'm going ask from now on. xD

whats critiscism?

fantageroxs wrote:

whats critiscism?

"criticism |ˈkritəˌsizəm|
noun
1 the expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes: he received a lot of criticism | he ignored the criticisms of his friends.
2 the analysis and judgment of the merits and faults of a literary or artistic work: alternative methods of criticism supported by well-developed literary theories.
• the scholarly investigation of literary or historical texts to determine their origin or intended form."

Basically, she's gonna tell you what's wrong with the picture. and tell you how to improve.

oh ok yes i allow that. i kinda messed up on the panda but i was using a pen so i couldnt erase it lol

I thought it was a koala....

3/10
-One hand is bigger than the other
-There's not shading what-so-ever
-A pen is the semi-worst tool to draw with
-The leaves aren't even
-It's head is lop-sided
-One eye is higher than the other
-The plant has no texture

yea i know lol im really bad at drawing lol and we dont have pencils or anything just pens and for the shading, i dont have markers or crayons and bamboo is smooth so y should i draw texture? and some leaves are supposed to b small u know what, im gonna make a topic about a pic i did in drawing class

fantageroxs wrote:

yea i know lol im really bad at drawing lol and we dont have pencils or anything just pens and for the shading, i dont have markers or crayons and bamboo is smooth so y should i draw texture? and some leaves are supposed to b small u know what, im gonna make a topic about a pic i did in drawing class

the bamboo is smooth, but that doesn't mean it's flat. and you can easily, lightly shade the bamboo with the pen.. and you should draw the texture so you can improve.

the leaves are pretty good, but there are some leaves that are like. WOAH, you're in the wrong branch. lol. like they're not proportioned.

and you go make that topic.

it's a cute picture though.

and I'm just keeping in mind that you're eight..

yea i cant think of a thing to draw can sumne give me a idea?

-The leaves, they're not placed right.
-The panda isn't colored right, the arms and legs should be black.
-Bamboo isn't that thick.
-The branch on the tree looks like it fell off.
-The branches look like they're picked off and stuck back on. Especially this one:


6/10

dont worry im still working on another picture and i dont have black thats why

Still, you can color them blue instead of leaving them white.

oh yea i should...

I'm just not gonna say anything. Because I might end up hurting your feelings with critique.

its a good pic, if ur really 8 then its really good 4 ur age.

7/10

thnx soli!

2.5/10 I agree with the other two critiques and all, keep them in mind.

6/10 it could be improved. Just go with the other critiques~ It's still good though. You have talent for your age. If that's your real age, that is.

i would give it 6.5/10. i guess lol

It's fine for your age. I can't draw any better! Lol! However, one arm is slightly thinner than the other. I would give you a 9/10.

Ani wrote:

3/10
-One hand is bigger than the other
-There's not shading what-so-ever
-A pen is the semi-worst tool to draw with
-The leaves aren't even
-It's head is lop-sided
-One eye is higher than the other
-The plant has no texture

u liar!!i used a pen to draw somthing and it came out beautiful!!
look at dis!!:

Um..wow..this is something I've never seen before...

my picture?

1.5/10 First of all you gotta work on the panda. The bamboos are okay but the panda needs more effort.