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alex
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| Subject: Satisfaction Garunteed  Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:59 pm | |
| ASDFG My first piece I'm finally satisfied with. The only thing I see needs to be fixed is the shape of the right side of her head.  | |
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Penny
Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1659
Join date : 2011-07-28
Age : 90
Location : Yummy waffle...# Thank you, son. :]
| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:17 pm | |
| Really good! Yes, agreed with the right side partt.  guaranteed...  | |
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Blackrose
Hero Fantagian
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Join date : 2010-07-20
| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:19 pm | |
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alex
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Age : 25
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| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:37 pm | |
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lucia
Passionate Fantagian
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Age : 24
Location : at my home
| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:01 pm | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:04 pm | |
| Thank you! Comments like that make me happy. c: | |
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Blackrose
Hero Fantagian
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Join date : 2010-07-20
| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:05 pm | |
| [quote="Ani"]Thanks guys. :3 [/quote
well then your welcome i guess | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:27 pm | |
| Any critique? I mean, there's gotta be something wrong with it. >b> | |
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Blackrose
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338
Join date : 2010-07-20
| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:29 pm | |
| um..... make the head smaller um ..... the face could use a little re sizing.... and maybe work on outline? O_o | |
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alex
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Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 25
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| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:50 pm | |
| @Anime it's supposed to be a full head portrait. It's supposed to be giant.
Yeah, i'll work on the outline. ^u^ | |
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lucia
Passionate Fantagian
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Join date : 2011-09-04
Age : 24
Location : at my home
| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Tue Sep 06, 2011 10:09 pm | |
| hmm idk what u sould change but y is the top of her hair still yellow? or is that still her hair in a pony tail... | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:29 am | |
| The head has a weird shape on the right side, but it's nothing big. The eyes should also have two dots, instead of one. Also, the nose is facing the wrong way, or it's just the eyes. If you want her to face right, I suggest you move her nose more to the right. The ribbon sides are un even, again, nothing big. The longest bang looks a bit weird, you should make it shorter.
Thats really the only bad things. 8/10.
Hope I helped : D |
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alex
Moderator
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Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 25
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| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:14 pm | |
| @Fantageroxs let's just go with that.  @Finn I'll try to fix that. I have this problem with eyes+noses acing the wrong way. :B | |
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Relora
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Join date : 2010-11-30
Age : 26
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| | Subject: Re: Satisfaction Garunteed Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:11 pm | |
| Also she needs an ear :3
I like it ^^ | |
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