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PostSubject: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 6:04 pm

lol. don't mind the sloppy writing ;X
anywaysss.
here you go (x

btw. yes I am aware of the horrible shading xP,
the imperfect hairlines,
and the awkward eyelashes O.o

Tsukiyomi, Utau Untitl10

Opinions wanted & appreciated.
CRITIQUE MY DRAWING FELLOW FORUMERS / BBYDOLLS<3
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 6:09 pm

Very nice! I'll critique, though. c;

The hair is awesome. It's just the left side that bothers me. The strands are good, though. The eyes, however, are a bit too low. The nose and mouth are in the perfect spot. The neck is good, and so is the outfit.

Well, that's all. I really like it, though.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 6:11 pm

Charlotte wrote:
Very nice! I'll critique, though. c;

The hair is awesome. It's just the left side that bothers me. The strands are good, though. The eyes, however, are a bit too low. The nose and mouth are in the perfect spot. The neck is good, and so is the outfit.

Well, that's all. I really like it, though.

Ohhh. I see what you're saying about the left side Razz
I never noticed that until now. o_o
and the eyes do look a bit low don't they?

I'll work on it xD
Ty for the feedback :3
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 6:11 pm

WHOA! i love it (:

it's pretty much better then mine i guess lol xD
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 6:12 pm

radiogummie wrote:
Charlotte wrote:
Very nice! I'll critique, though. c;

The hair is awesome. It's just the left side that bothers me. The strands are good, though. The eyes, however, are a bit too low. The nose and mouth are in the perfect spot. The neck is good, and so is the outfit.

Well, that's all. I really like it, though.

Ohhh. I see what you're saying about the left side Razz
I never noticed that until now. o_o
and the eyes do look a bit low don't they?

I'll work on it xD
Ty for the feedback :3

You're very welcome. [:
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 6:19 pm

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WHOA! i love it (:

it's pretty much better then mine i guess lol xD

LOOOOOOOOOOOOL.
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!
YOUR DRAWING IS GAWWWWJUS<3

edit cough. I mean. Thank you very mucho. But I love yours~
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 6:29 pm

good job. that looks awesome.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 6:31 pm

THAT'S SO AMAZING.

colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 8:29 pm

Homestuck wrote:
THAT'S SO AMAZING.

colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3

lol why thank you cx
& I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D:

Katie_Forever wrote:
good job. that looks awesome.

Theeeenkies [:
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 8:30 pm

radiogummie wrote:
Homestuck wrote:
THAT'S SO AMAZING.

colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3

lol why thank you cx
& I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D:


You will not<3
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 8:35 pm

Homestuck wrote:
radiogummie wrote:
Homestuck wrote:
THAT'S SO AMAZING.

colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3

lol why thank you cx
& I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D:


You will not<3

asdljfas;dfjl I'll try but Imma draw other misc. stuff first xD!

& the one thing that bugs me is that the crayola colored pencils are that they never have a skin-toned pencil
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 8:39 pm

radiogummie wrote:
Homestuck wrote:
radiogummie wrote:
Homestuck wrote:
THAT'S SO AMAZING.

colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3

lol why thank you cx
& I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D:


You will not<3

asdljfas;dfjl I'll try but Imma draw other misc. stuff first xD!

& the one thing that bugs me is that the crayola colored pencils are that they never have a skin-toned pencil
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Get an orange or yellow and lightly colour it.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 8:47 pm

Homestuck wrote:
radiogummie wrote:
Homestuck wrote:
radiogummie wrote:
Homestuck wrote:
THAT'S SO AMAZING.

colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3

lol why thank you cx
& I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D:


You will not<3

asdljfas;dfjl I'll try but Imma draw other misc. stuff first xD!

& the one thing that bugs me is that the crayola colored pencils are that they never have a skin-toned pencil
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Get an orange or yellow and lightly colour it.

I tried that.
orange makes it look a little jersey shore-ish.
LOL. but I'll make a mix or somethinggg.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 8:48 pm

LOL, that made me laugh. <3
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 9:01 pm

Homestuck wrote:
LOL, that made me laugh. <3

Happy to oblige, bbydoll c(x
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 7:19 am

10/10 Omg very good!
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 10:06 am

tysvm Patrick!
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 10:36 am

im SOO JEALOUS RITE NOW THE HAIR IS AWESOME !!! think imma going to cry no jk lol its AWESOME
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 10:38 am

Bbydoll wrote:
Anime wrote:
WHOA! i love it (:

it's pretty much better then mine i guess lol xD

LOOOOOOOOOOOOL.
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!
YOUR DRAWING IS GAWWWWJUS<3

edit cough. I mean. Thank you very mucho. But I love yours~

haha thanks your is great too ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau   Tsukiyomi, Utau Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 11:06 am

Hilol24 wrote:
im SOO JEALOUS RITE NOW THE HAIR IS AWESOME !!! think imma going to cry no jk lol its AWESOME

heh (x THANK YOU <3
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