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RadioGummie
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| Subject: Tsukiyomi, Utau  Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:04 pm | |
| lol. don't mind the sloppy writing ;X anywaysss. here you go (x btw. yes I am aware of the horrible shading xP, the imperfect hairlines, and the awkward eyelashes O.o  Opinions wanted & appreciated. CRITIQUE MY DRAWING FELLOW FORUMERS / BBYDOLLS<3 | |
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v
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:09 pm | |
| Very nice! I'll critique, though. c;
The hair is awesome. It's just the left side that bothers me. The strands are good, though. The eyes, however, are a bit too low. The nose and mouth are in the perfect spot. The neck is good, and so is the outfit.
Well, that's all. I really like it, though. | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:11 pm | |
| - Charlotte wrote:
- Very nice! I'll critique, though. c;
The hair is awesome. It's just the left side that bothers me. The strands are good, though. The eyes, however, are a bit too low. The nose and mouth are in the perfect spot. The neck is good, and so is the outfit.
Well, that's all. I really like it, though. Ohhh. I see what you're saying about the left side  I never noticed that until now. o_o and the eyes do look a bit low don't they? I'll work on it xD Ty for the feedback :3 | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:11 pm | |
| WHOA! i love it (:
it's pretty much better then mine i guess lol xD | |
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v
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:12 pm | |
| - radiogummie wrote:
- Charlotte wrote:
- Very nice! I'll critique, though. c;
The hair is awesome. It's just the left side that bothers me. The strands are good, though. The eyes, however, are a bit too low. The nose and mouth are in the perfect spot. The neck is good, and so is the outfit.
Well, that's all. I really like it, though.
Ohhh. I see what you're saying about the left side
I never noticed that until now. o_o
and the eyes do look a bit low don't they?
I'll work on it xD
Ty for the feedback :3 You're very welcome. [: | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:19 pm | |
| - Anime wrote:
- WHOA! i love it (:
it's pretty much better then mine i guess lol xD LOOOOOOOOOOOOL. ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! YOUR DRAWING IS GAWWWWJUS<3 edit cough. I mean. Thank you very mucho. But I love yours~ | |
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Katie_Forever
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:29 pm | |
| good job. that looks awesome. | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 6:31 pm | |
| THAT'S SO AMAZING.
colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3 | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:29 pm | |
| - Homestuck wrote:
- THAT'S SO AMAZING.
colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3 lol why thank you cx & I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D: - Katie_Forever wrote:
- good job. that looks awesome.
Theeeenkies [: | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:30 pm | |
| - radiogummie wrote:
- Homestuck wrote:
- THAT'S SO AMAZING.
colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3
lol why thank you cx
& I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D:
You will not<3 | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:35 pm | |
| - Homestuck wrote:
- radiogummie wrote:
- Homestuck wrote:
- THAT'S SO AMAZING.
colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3
lol why thank you cx
& I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D:
You will not<3 asdljfas;dfjl I'll try but Imma draw other misc. stuff first xD! & the one thing that bugs me is that the crayola colored pencils are that they never have a skin-toned pencil -________________-; | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:39 pm | |
| - radiogummie wrote:
- Homestuck wrote:
- radiogummie wrote:
- Homestuck wrote:
- THAT'S SO AMAZING.
colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3
lol why thank you cx
& I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D:
You will not<3
asdljfas;dfjl I'll try but Imma draw other misc. stuff first xD!
& the one thing that bugs me is that the crayola colored pencils are that they never have a skin-toned pencil
-________________-; Get an orange or yellow and lightly colour it. | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:47 pm | |
| - Homestuck wrote:
- radiogummie wrote:
- Homestuck wrote:
- radiogummie wrote:
- Homestuck wrote:
- THAT'S SO AMAZING.
colour it for me pl0x bbz. kthxbye. <3
lol why thank you cx
& I'm scared that if I color it, Imma mess it up D:
You will not<3
asdljfas;dfjl I'll try but Imma draw other misc. stuff first xD!
& the one thing that bugs me is that the crayola colored pencils are that they never have a skin-toned pencil
-________________-;
Get an orange or yellow and lightly colour it. I tried that. orange makes it look a little jersey shore-ish. LOL. but I'll make a mix or somethinggg. | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 8:48 pm | |
| LOL, that made me laugh. <3 | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sat Sep 10, 2011 9:01 pm | |
| - Homestuck wrote:
- LOL, that made me laugh. <3
Happy to oblige, bbydoll c(x | |
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pat
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:19 am | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sun Sep 11, 2011 10:06 am | |
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hilol24
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sun Sep 11, 2011 10:36 am | |
| im SOO JEALOUS RITE NOW THE HAIR IS AWESOME !!! think imma going to cry no jk lol its AWESOME | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sun Sep 11, 2011 10:38 am | |
| - Bbydoll wrote:
- Anime wrote:
- WHOA! i love it (:
it's pretty much better then mine i guess lol xD
LOOOOOOOOOOOOL.
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!
YOUR DRAWING IS GAWWWWJUS<3
edit cough. I mean. Thank you very mucho. But I love yours~ haha thanks your is great too ^.^ | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Tsukiyomi, Utau Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:06 am | |
| - Hilol24 wrote:
- im SOO JEALOUS RITE NOW THE HAIR IS AWESOME !!! think imma going to cry no jk lol its AWESOME
heh (x THANK YOU <3 | |
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