a sketch of some sort

i've started some colouring, critique?

I love critiquing. ;3;<3

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It's nice! The shading on the face is good. In my opinion, I think the arms and the legs need work, though. [the shading] It's very cute, don't get me wrong. The arms need work, too. It seems a bit rough on the left [or right i'm not sure lololol] shoulder, though. The expression is adorable, and the eye is fantastic. One leg is bigger than the other; need to fix that. The hair and the hat is cute. >w<

That's all I see, though. Wonderful job. c:

Thanks I'll try to work on that. :3

The skin shading should have more tone, or something like that. Good for your first

LOL, it's not my first. o_o

That is not a sketch.
A sketch isn't coloured.
It has remains of the base you first drew.
And they never look neat.

@Munny oh yes when i sketch there always pencil lines and when i try erasing them they still stay there ....

It's okay, just work on the leg sizing.

Cool 9/10 Not bad

It's cute :3

I think the bangs/face on her hair should be connected with the rest of her hair, as opposed to a line drawn so it looks like the body of her hair is covering it. I think the blush that you gave her is a tad too low. if anything some of her hair should be covering it, to give her face a liddo' but of "dimension" I also agree with everybody else about the shading. but it's really cute. I suppose that those are leg warmers on her feet, if they are, they're really cute xD
if they're not, you should work on the boots. ;P