Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story

Subject: Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story Sat Mar 27, 2010 8:13 pm

Chapter 1

September 1st, 2010

Dear Diary,

It's the beginning of the school year of junior high, and I have no idea what to expect. None of my friends will be there because I moved back to my hometown in Japan. The last time I've been here was when I was like, 3 or something, and I have no idea how to speak Japanese! At least the school I'm going to speaks English. I already miss my BFF! Nicole. By the way, since this diary is new, my name is Mikaru Hatsune, and I'll be writing here now.... Well, I gotta go to school now... Bye Diary...

Sincerely,
Mikaru Hatsune
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Chapter 2

September 3, 2010

Dear Diary,

Omg! School was better than I thought cause' a bunch of other teens there knew English, and a lot of people were from America too! Plus, there was a really cute guy there. Sadly, he's popular... I learned his name too, his name is Ryan. I know, really American, right? Well, that's cause' he's one of the people who's from America! When I tried to talk to him during lunch, a bunch of popular girls interrupted me by pushing me aside JUST to talk to him! Ugh, he must be really popular. Sadly, since I'm new, I didn't get any friends yet... All though this girl started to talk to me, she seemed like the geekish-smarty pants type. Well, I'll add more stuff later, peace out Diary!

Sincerely,
Mikaru Hatsune
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Subject: Re: Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story Sat Mar 27, 2010 8:55 pm

This is great! But its not September 2010 yet! Its still March almost april!

Subject: Re: Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:36 pm

This sounds like it will be cute. Typical plot line though. The way your writing it like a journal is very creative. Keep writing. ;]

Subject: Re: Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:39 pm

lol i know, poke. it's supposed to be..

Subject: Re: Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story Sat Mar 27, 2010 10:01 pm

Oh ok! Anyways, awesome job

Subject: Re: Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story Sat Mar 27, 2010 10:05 pm

thanks poke Smile

Subject: Re: Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story Sat Mar 27, 2010 10:32 pm

No problem! It's a great beginning!!!

Subject: Re: Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story Sun Mar 28, 2010 6:14 am

Its great, although there actually shouldn't be a different chapter for every day...

Former Staff Posts : 3165 Join date : 2010-01-27

Thats great!

And yes, I do agree with Ari with the chapter part.

But I want more! XD

Subject: Re: Diary of Mikaru Hatsune - Story Sun Mar 28, 2010 9:22 am

Nice story.
The only thing I dont like is how much the name sounds like Miku Hatsune.
Besides that, Great job.

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