~Ice sisters~ Chapter 1 A very very very SHOCKING THING.

" HOORAY!" I shouted in glee that woke my sisters up. " ALEXIA STOP FOOLING AROUND!" Then I calmed down I still kept bouncing. My parents walked into Emma's room my 6 year old hyper sister. They put up the "shh sign." As I grabbed an cold snack I noticed something I forgot my lunch! I ran into my room and slipped because of my shoes! CRASH! My leg was bleeding I thought " No problem! " I used my ice power's to heal it. I got on the bus and sat down next to my friends. But I had a crush on 1 his name was Razor he had Water and Wind power which are the power's I love. I sat down next to Razor and said " So.. How was Sunday?" "Fine" He said.. There was a 3 minute silence so before I could say something. The bus stopped at school. Razor said " It was nice hanging out wanna meet after school sometime? " I nodded eagerly. Just then my best friend Julie Had gem powers which was awesome! Anyways she said " GUESS WHAT!" I said " what? " She said eagerly " YOU KNOW RAZOR? " I nodded curiously " I'M GOING ON A DATE WITH HIM!"

cant wait for more

I like the story-line! I just have a one critique.
1. Maybe try to cut down on run on sentences.

I woke up beaming. "HOO-" I began to shout when my parents glared at me. I mouthed a simple 'Sorry' and started to get ready. My hyper sister, Emma, wailed about some bad dream.
Try like that.
DO NOT CRITIQUE THAT ANYONE I WAS POWER-WRITING :3

i like it
it's very cool
can't wait for more