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| Subject: Another attempt at a human girl.  Tue Nov 22, 2011 7:39 pm | |
| Hay. Um this is an attempt at a sad human woman I made. Yes I have drawn other humans, but now I want to know what you think!   This actually did not take long to do. (Maybe like thirty minutes?) (I don't have a scanner or anything, so it may be extremely blurry. Dx I so need one soon though) Yeah I do realize I made a bit of mistakes, (Like the nose is kind of awkward and the lips are kind of low, and the right eye being kind of low) but I am so lazy to fix them.  By the way, umm I seriously have never posted on this forum before, so no one may know me. xD I am Sabrina. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Tue Nov 22, 2011 8:11 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
SORRY,the right eye on my corrections is a bit too wide lol,8.5/10 I did this in a rush sooo yea... | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Tue Nov 22, 2011 8:23 pm | |
| Thank you! It all makes sense now. xD I kind of fixed it here. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Tue Nov 22, 2011 8:25 pm | |
| it's no problem (: anytime | |
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sherley739
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Tue Nov 22, 2011 9:59 pm | |
| great job 7.8/10 its really good. youve got alot of potential.i agree with the crituques above me. keep it up and welcome to the forum | |
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Tue Nov 22, 2011 10:02 pm | |
| Welcome to the forum! c: --- Critiques are allowed, right? If not.. I'll just put it in a spoiler, lol. - Spoiler:
The eyes seem a bit sharp; maybe make it a little more round? The nose has an awkward shape, & the mouth is uneven. I like how you did the hair though.
Please, continue to post your artwork; you won't believe how much you'll improve if you get critiques like this from many people, such as Abbey, Loke, Timegear, etc. [:
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Tue Nov 22, 2011 10:09 pm | |
| 7/10
very well done. The eyes and lips and head shape seemed a bit awkward but that's it ^^ | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:18 am | |
| Thanks guys! I will try to fix it to make it looks better. xD Kind of rushed it, but eh.
Yeah I am taking critiques any time. It will help a lot! :3 | |
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:22 am | |
| Wow, it looks GORGEOUS! Good job on that! | |
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Katie_Forever
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:22 am | |
| Thats very nice. Considering it didnt take you very long, you should be very proud with it  All the other critiques that were made by other people are pretty much what I would have said so I wont bother repeating it | |
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:44 am | |
| I like it. But...
~Her eyes are large.
~Her lips are crooked.
~Her expression looks forced.
~Her nose is awkward.
I give it a 7/10~ ^3^ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Another attempt at a human girl. Wed Nov 23, 2011 4:16 pm | |
| Thank you the three of you! I should upload a different picture of this same one soon, I did edit it some how. (Left it at school. Dx) | |
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